Huey's Play House: Track Feed Back

Originally Posted by Pronto_Banks

OverDose x ProntoBanks - YouTube

Beat on some dub step techno ish tip. not your beat though, is this a friends beat? beat off youtube? FROM NOW ON SPECIFY WHERE YOU GOT THE BEAT FROM but yea, shit was hype. got a lil repetitive after awhile though

PERFORMANCE not your best imo but still cool across the board. i like ur laid back swagger on track, but it didn't really work on this track at points, since the track is so hype. you went in on the second verse though. but nah you had swagger throughout, never really sounded like u were reading. good performance

Hook Od' on em. pretty cool, nothing crazy, solid hook though.

PRODUCTION This is where shit got fucked up. the production of the beat is top of the line, but the beat is turned down so you can hear your amateur vocal mix. which results in a heavy hype rap track that cant get slapped outta the speakers. its the juxtaposition of the amateur vocals on the professional beat that makes this song fall short as a whole. it just doesnt work, it feels like 2 layers rather than one song full of integrating sounds. This is where a lot of rappers fuck up imo as well. they just want some shit to rap on, but the shit doesnt sit inside the beat, your vocal was outside the beat the whole time. The effects on your vocal was cool, at some points a lil excessive, might have been cooler if used sparingly, but a cool change up.

LYRIC very solid, cool flow switches. lyric was original and well written to the beat and effects. also didn't get too lyrical to where shit went over my head on first listen, which is good for a banger style track like this. nothing i remembered as quotable though

OVERALL scores 6.5 outta 10. not gunna lie the production just fucked this whole thing up to me. you can't bang this track, and its ment to be a banger. its saving graces being your swaggy writing and performance. solid track, but fell short of its intention and with a few tweaks could have been something great

Originally Posted by Pronto_Banks

OverDose x ProntoBanks - YouTube

Beat on some dub step techno ish tip. not your beat though, is this a friends beat? beat off youtube? FROM NOW ON SPECIFY WHERE YOU GOT THE BEAT FROM but yea, shit was hype. got a lil repetitive after awhile though

PERFORMANCE not your best imo but still cool across the board. i like ur laid back swagger on track, but it didn't really work on this track at points, since the track is so hype. you went in on the second verse though. but nah you had swagger throughout, never really sounded like u were reading. good performance

Hook Od' on em. pretty cool, nothing crazy, solid hook though.

PRODUCTION This is where shit got fucked up. the production of the beat is top of the line, but the beat is turned down so you can hear your amateur vocal mix. which results in a heavy hype rap track that cant get slapped outta the speakers. its the juxtaposition of the amateur vocals on the professional beat that makes this song fall short as a whole. it just doesnt work, it feels like 2 layers rather than one song full of integrating sounds. This is where a lot of rappers fuck up imo as well. they just want some shit to rap on, but the shit doesnt sit inside the beat, your vocal was outside the beat the whole time. The effects on your vocal was cool, at some points a lil excessive, might have been cooler if used sparingly, but a cool change up.

LYRIC very solid, cool flow switches. lyric was original and well written to the beat and effects. also didn't get too lyrical to where shit went over my head on first listen, which is good for a banger style track like this. nothing i remembered as quotable though

OVERALL scores 6.5 outta 10. not gunna lie the production just fucked this whole thing up to me. you can't bang this track, and its ment to be a banger. its saving graces being your swaggy writing and performance. solid track, but fell short of its intention and with a few tweaks could have been something great