First Track

[J-Merk]

beat is hot,

overall mix is not good vocals is too loud

1st verse was monotone, sounded boring, you gotta put that passion into it, come wit that strong emotion n delivery. flow was ok some places was off. ya overdubs are too loud also and some are off u should just be barley able to tell they are there. keep workin yo you aint to far off.

2nd verse dude comes wit good emotion, flow was iight, i think the olny real bad part is the quality and the mix

just work on those things n this song has potential.

[J-Merk]

beat is hot,

overall mix is not good vocals is too loud

1st verse was monotone, sounded boring, you gotta put that passion into it, come wit that strong emotion n delivery. flow was ok some places was off. ya overdubs are too loud also and some are off u should just be barley able to tell they are there. keep workin yo you aint to far off.

2nd verse dude comes wit good emotion, flow was iight, i think the olny real bad part is the quality and the mix

just work on those things n this song has potential.