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B-F-M 03-01-2012 02:45 PM

First Track
 

come leave your feedback fellas...:high:

onestophiphop 03-01-2012 10:48 PM

I like the beat, You gotta work on your emotion and memorizing your lyrics before you spit, your mix needs work too, lyrics sound straight tho, when you get a moment return the feed, ONe http://www.letsbeef.com/forums/showthread.php?t=111427

J-Merk 03-05-2012 07:16 PM

beat is hot,

overall mix is not good vocals is too loud

1st verse was monotone, sounded boring, you gotta put that passion into it, come wit that strong emotion n delivery. flow was ok some places was off. ya overdubs are too loud also and some are off u should just be barley able to tell they are there. keep workin yo you aint to far off.

2nd verse dude comes wit good emotion, flow was iight, i think the olny real bad part is the quality and the mix

just work on those things n this song has potential.

B-F-M 03-06-2012 01:06 AM

I know my delivery was bad, next track already recorded. Much different.


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