Help (Round 2) - Page 4 - Lets Beef

GPhantom · #31 08-10-2010, 05:51 AM

shit iight , ima fuck around and write my line right now lol.

Brown fiend & t__N

are there names

GPhantom · 08-10-2010, 05:51 AM

shit iight , ima fuck around and write my line right now lol.

Brown fiend & t__N

are there names

**EJT** · #32 08-10-2010, 05:56 AM

brown is too easy to flippparound

**EJT** · 08-10-2010, 05:56 AM

brown is too easy to flippparound

GPhantom · #33 08-10-2010, 06:07 AM

yeah it is,

shit , this like a muhfuckin BYE week
i think someone dope as fuck for'da next round.

GPhantom · 08-10-2010, 06:07 AM

yeah it is,

shit , this like a muhfuckin BYE week
i think someone dope as fuck for'da next round.

**EJT** · #34 08-10-2010, 06:11 AM

check inboxxxxxx

**EJT** · 08-10-2010, 06:11 AM

check inboxxxxxx

**Chester Waterman** · #35 08-10-2010, 11:07 AM

First punch, not cleanly cut enough basic yes, but I wanted to see you try it basic, but it's not as cleanly set up. You want a set up, then the delivering multie, don't but them together in one multie like "TRIPPING OVER HIS SHOE LACES", do it more "He's "tripping" like his SHOE LACES UNTIED" or something, you get me?

**Chester Waterman** · 08-10-2010, 11:07 AM

First punch, not cleanly cut enough basic yes, but I wanted to see you try it basic, but it's not as cleanly set up. You want a set up, then the delivering multie, don't but them together in one multie like "TRIPPING OVER HIS SHOE LACES", do it more "He's "tripping" like his SHOE LACES UNTIED" or something, you get me?

**Chester Waterman** · #36 08-10-2010, 11:11 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Stephen

1) Dude wouldn't hold heat, if he even had the SUN IN HIS HANDS
2) He ain't deep in the hood, ....PAS
3) Only time the bitch's fresh??? ....PASS

Can't think for shit now lol

Ok, the first one has the set up. You can work like that. It has bad wording, but wording comes with delivery, which is built upon if you work harder at it later.

The other ones aren't too hard. Just think of another meaning of the words.

Hood = Ghetto (Intended meaning)
Hood = On a Jacket
Hood = On a Car

He wouldn't be in a hood if he as an engine
He wouldn't be in a hood if he was a head

Obviously two really weak concepts, but getting that mind state can let you elevate from that style. It's not my style, so I'm not trying to convert you to mine or anything, it's the basic punchline structure. Other styles come with devlopments in your game after you have this foundation set.

**Chester Waterman** · 08-10-2010, 11:11 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Stephen

1) Dude wouldn't hold heat, if he even had the SUN IN HIS HANDS
2) He ain't deep in the hood, ....PAS
3) Only time the bitch's fresh??? ....PASS

Can't think for shit now lol

Ok, the first one has the set up. You can work like that. It has bad wording, but wording comes with delivery, which is built upon if you work harder at it later.

The other ones aren't too hard. Just think of another meaning of the words.

Hood = Ghetto (Intended meaning)
Hood = On a Jacket
Hood = On a Car

He wouldn't be in a hood if he as an engine
He wouldn't be in a hood if he was a head

Obviously two really weak concepts, but getting that mind state can let you elevate from that style. It's not my style, so I'm not trying to convert you to mine or anything, it's the basic punchline structure. Other styles come with devlopments in your game after you have this foundation set.

Split Personality · #37 08-10-2010, 02:31 PM

Your on the site since '07 and your looking for advice now? Give it up now kid, stay away from rap battles son

Split Personality · 08-10-2010, 02:31 PM

Your on the site since '07 and your looking for advice now? Give it up now kid, stay away from rap battles son

**Step S** · #38 08-10-2010, 05:56 PM

NOooooooooooooooooooooooooo, I Started August 2009. LOL ... Mindless Was Trying To Fix Up My Profile Comment Button, But It Failed, So I Lost Everyone That Was On My Block List And My D.O.B On LB Changed Lol.

**Step S** · 08-10-2010, 05:56 PM

NOooooooooooooooooooooooooo, I Started August 2009. LOL ... Mindless Was Trying To Fix Up My Profile Comment Button, But It Failed, So I Lost Everyone That Was On My Block List And My D.O.B On LB Changed Lol.