ATT 2018 ROUND 2: Writer 2 vs Writer 3 [Writer 2 wins via no-show]

[The Ghost of Freak]

I thought this was interesting. A bit flowery with the vocabulary, which is not a bad thing, but possibly perceived as overdone in the sense that it can detract from the narrative a bit depending on the reader. I guess a better way of positing that comment is that it felt slow to start due to some expounding, but I do feel it eventually picked up all the aspects of the topic image. Hope the feedback makes sense. (Big words are hard to read unless your Shodan )

[The Ghost of Freak]

I thought this was interesting. A bit flowery with the vocabulary, which is not a bad thing, but possibly perceived as overdone in the sense that it can detract from the narrative a bit depending on the reader. I guess a better way of positing that comment is that it felt slow to start due to some expounding, but I do feel it eventually picked up all the aspects of the topic image. Hope the feedback makes sense. (Big words are hard to read unless your Shodan )