#GetThatPotato

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supposed to be: thats a DOUBLE-ENTENDRE... TROUBLE, IMA MONSTA, U expected MJ cause Im da TYPE-TO-BE-SCORING... but U fucked around & got "Killmonger" ...MICHAEL-B-JORDAN!

No word of a lie. Phro you fucked this and underestimated your opponent. Your lack of creativity and forced played gun bars nearly madevery me vote the other way. Epic that was the best I've seen from you.keep grindinh

broken multies and played punches.. this battle was dissappointing. Got my winner though. 

Phroxen

if i see a card w/ ur name on it i'mma fuckin pull it. swingin iron, u gon "hear the FOUR" like u wasn't lookin.

Don't get it

u got "one shot to bounce" these ain't rubber bullets, i'll fkn put u to sleep & u gonna "nod" like u understood it.

Two good punches back to back although the second was a bit basic

i'll drive thru & burners heat ya crib, get somethin cookin. hide ya body, leave u tucked in bushes. bitch don't play the hero, i'll "get out the whip & put a bitch in the sky" & have ya "plane outta sight" like Wonder Woman.

I had to look up the invisible jet but otherwise this was the first haymaker of your verse. Good execution other than rhyming cooking and bushes with woman (doesn't work for me but maybe it does for you)

u better split when the shotty get lickety.. arm leg leg arm chest, pardon the symmetry but missin parts is hardly a mystery, u'll be lost for words when i "draw the stick... figure w/o lines" u ain't bodyin anything.

Good setup but imo the payoff is too predictable and I'm not convinced that it makes total sense grammatically. Okay bar

fuck ya squad i won't let an Asgardian end the streak, all odin wants is ta mimic me, toxic's a bitch & he copies his writtens, please & u ain't tossin the fists w/ me, if u wanna exchange sumn ur coppin a gift receipt, i'm droppin em instantly.. only way we see a "tie work out" is doin karate w/ Billy B.

I like the angle of dissing his crew but the payof takes too long and then it's underwhelming, especially since I remember someone else having a similar (Taekwondo) bar in this GC round. 

ur playin ball in the little league w/ the tee vs. a God w/ the raunchiest imagery, "ur all over the place" - the walls & the kitchen sink..

Good scheme continuation but weak impact

the carpet, it's sickening & u gon need more than a bottle of Mr. Clean when "the can spray u up & ya insides a mess" we ain't havin a party w/ silly string.

Still on the same scheme and this punch was actually pretty good although not amazing.

Summary: I can tell that you weren't trying here (the lack of caps gave that away too) but it was still an alright verse. No really great hits though and some lame concepts.

Epic23

He wasnt even "dope" with his PAST-ADDICTIONS now he inhaling "smoke" GAS-EMISSIONS "these ole fakes wouldn't rotate in my space" on NASA-MISSIONS!

I'm not sure what this was supposed to mean. Is it a bar about the moon landing being fake? If so it needs some clarification. Okay execution

lets "end it here" he KNOWS-WHATS-GOOD? he think I'ma "engineer" (engine near) I'm so CLOSE-TO-THE-HOOD!!

Clever concept and it relates to the previous bar, but engine-near is worded so awkwardly that it doesn't really hit

Everything I SAY-GEOMETRICAL so Ima "display these talents" & get "PH BALANCED" until this pussy LAY-SYMMETRICAL!!

Not sure this is a broken multi (GEOMETRICAL/SYMMETRICAL) but I'll give it the benefit of the doubt. Didn't really hit imo

he may be retartded but he that SPECIAL-THO! LEGION-OF-DOOM, is just some GEEKS-IN-A-ROOM, I'll put da HEAT-TO-THEM-SOON, scope & lens will have em "boxed in" like they MEETINGS-ON-ZOOM!

Good flow but the concept is lackluster

yall like DAMN-HE-RUDE, cause I "flip the words" back like FAMILY-FEUD, I got this covered like CANOPY-CREWS.... 

Two concepts on the same scheme but both are pretty basic. Family Feud was the better of the two but canopy crews was too basic to hit at all

U want "venom"Its TOXIN-WORKING who PHROXEN-MURKING da "internet" couldn't get PROXY-SERVING!

"Phroxen" is supposed to be pronounced "frozen" but I guess you thought it was "frocks-in" so I'll give you a pass. Not sure I caught what you meant by proxy-serving but I didn't really like it.

How dis bitch GETTIN-IT-ON? even when he 'google" he aint SITTIN ON CHROME!!

very overdone concept

this how I HANDLE-THESE-CLOWNS...cause this pussy a "KAT " KARL-ANTHONY-TOWNS!!

Doesn't really work without more setup, it comes too out of nowhere

put a "L" on this VETERAN, supposed to be WELL-KNOWN-IN-TEXTING... "King of one bars?" thats just bad CELL-PHONE-RECEPTION!!

good setup but another very played concept

I came with "grenades" TO TOAST YA ..I END-LAMES...cause my PEN-GAME's(pin) EXPLOSIVE! (grenade/pin) thats a DOUBLE-ENTENDRE... U expected MJ cause Im da TYPE-TO-BE-SCORING... but U fucked around & got "Killmonger" ...MICHAEL-B-JORDAN!

Rhyming was hard to follow here (not sure if "pen game's explosive" even rhymed with anything) and your expo just made it worse since DOUBLE-ENTENDRE/TROUBLE, IMA MONSTA is a broken multi. Nice cultural reference but the punch was again basic

Summary: There were a few okay concepts here but nothing that hit hard. Execution was mostly good, maybe even better than Phro's in some places, but Phro still won this clearly, mainly by having harder punches.

Fair's in.

Really nice bout here!! Fire!

My loser had a few forces. noticeable after that second read. overall dope shit here. salutes.

Concealed vote

Xen - really laid back style that Im a fan of. Some easy flips to start off here, but flows together well. Plane outta sight is cool. The stick figure bar is dope as hell, thought I think could of been slightly rearranged at the ending. The billy B line is alright, same for the silly string finisher. Some minor wordplay in there with the gift receipt and stuff, but nothing of note for me to mention.

E - So, first thing. I see a lot of this on LB - trying to cram some sort of wordplay into every single multi. It has a tendency to make it feel forced, which is what it did here. The rotate in my space is a cool bar though. Not a fan of the engine near flip. My brain cant make "he thinks Im an engine near" why? lol....PH balanced is nice though. Meeting on zoom is over used I feel like. I dont like the proxy serving concept, I feel like it was used backwards. Followed up w/ the sitting on chrome. Just doesnt hit for me. KAT bar, I mean...I get it. But doesnt KAT play for the timberwolves? Not even sure I see a punchline there other than name dropping a basketball player? I'm not a big fan of the killmonger finishe either, but its alright. 

Overall, going with what I deemed a more smooth verse. It would be easy to go with quantity over quality here, but one just had more high level flips and solid wording that helped the flow of the verse. The other was a bit choppy and forced for me.

Quick Vote: Winner barely won this imo. He took his opponent too lightly which almost cost him but managed to throw in some good punches with a smooth flow. Loser tried too much, crammed too many concepts, wordplay, etc. but sacrificed flow & readability here.

Phroxen. Damn them first bars....that's how you supposed to do this shit! That was like a a double double entendre? Pretty good kid...

Damn then the sleep nod like you understand!? It's just kept goin too. Flow punches top tier. 

Epic lotta multis. Joint was flowing too. You prolly be nice at audios. Not really too many punches tho. Maybe spread it out a little and get more punches rockin. Good shit tho.