Death 2 Chris 101 Exposed Diss Track (video)

[Cloud Knight]

Originally Posted by OSKAR

first beat go hard.

You had some presence but I do believe your approach was wrong on this beat.

Your lyrical game was lacking...If this is a diss then you should come hard end to finish..You barely had any lines with the 'wooo factor'

Flow was choppy most of the time.

Don't like the fact that the first beat paused and then a new one entered. I think you should have gone with the first beat throughout.

In the second beat, I could barely hear what ya said cause the gunshots sounded more than your vocals...

thanks, i tryed to mix it better in the second verse but the gunshots were too loud they came with the instrumental, and i didn't want to make my vocals to loud where it hurts the ears of the listener's
thanks for the advice thats what i need to keep elevating. & improving.

[Cloud Knight]

Originally Posted by OSKAR

first beat go hard.

You had some presence but I do believe your approach was wrong on this beat.

Your lyrical game was lacking...If this is a diss then you should come hard end to finish..You barely had any lines with the 'wooo factor'

Flow was choppy most of the time.

Don't like the fact that the first beat paused and then a new one entered. I think you should have gone with the first beat throughout.

In the second beat, I could barely hear what ya said cause the gunshots sounded more than your vocals...

thanks, i tryed to mix it better in the second verse but the gunshots were too loud they came with the instrumental, and i didn't want to make my vocals to loud where it hurts the ears of the listener's
thanks for the advice thats what i need to keep elevating. & improving.