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Originally Posted by ViTRiOL
Thank you, Just C... I have one question. You were talking about our wordplays not connecting: Get You (Exam Pulled) and Knives'll (Terrorist Open Fire) ... Can you give me an example of a worplay connecting to the original line? Because I have seen the likes of RhetoriK, DaDDiO and UA use wordplays that negate your criticism. I'm not hating, I would seriously like to hear an example from you.
Also, you still in text these days? ... 
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I'm not going to give you an example of what would have worked but the simple fact is like I stated the terrorist line didn't work as a WP as it's second meaning didn't make sense in the context of the line. Read the second meaning. You can see it's just gibberish.
But you can always post Daddio's, UA's and others WP so I can tell you IF and why I think they don't work.
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Talk and Prose next.
Just be patient. Lol each battle takes a minute to vote n feed on.