Previous alias: "POET LAUREATE" CREW: DPS 'Dead Poets Society' and "GOD_COMPLEX"...Here for the social atmosphere...and to experiment with different styles, concepts, schemes and improve my writing capabilities. I also enjoy, reading and analyzing others work...to me, as an observer...there is no such thing as a terrible verse or an extraordinary verse...we can learn from both. Battling is a labor of love. Peace!
Entirely not a criticism of your vote what so ever, but just wanted to clarify something.
If you were rhyming:-
BAKING WITH THE STATIC and AMAZING WITH THE RACKET, those are both 6 syllables. Sure, you can stylize it like amAZING WITH THE RACKET but as it's the first syllable thats dropping off you still end up with 6 consecutive rhyming syllables.