I'll critique your music.

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Originally Posted by Phil Banks

Ok from the start I don't like this beat anymore. Pianos all over. You know you got bars . It holds up as far as the song, but i'd like to hear you on something that isn't so up tempo. Those bars with inner rhymes are my favorites and those just sound better on a slower joint. You switched schemes quite a few times my favorite was the very last part of you verse. You need to record more stuff its a shame this all u got out

Appreciate this Phil. Was never a fan of song making tbh but got the itch to put something together to have to look back on one day.

Thanks.

[RULE]

Originally Posted by Phil Banks

Ok from the start I don't like this beat anymore. Pianos all over. You know you got bars . It holds up as far as the song, but i'd like to hear you on something that isn't so up tempo. Those bars with inner rhymes are my favorites and those just sound better on a slower joint. You switched schemes quite a few times my favorite was the very last part of you verse. You need to record more stuff its a shame this all u got out

Appreciate this Phil. Was never a fan of song making tbh but got the itch to put something together to have to look back on one day.

Thanks.