Thanks for the educated votes! I loved straights verse think it was it was really well thought out. Just gunna drop a quick expo- the way the mother is holding the baby from her mouth is the way that dogs and cats hold their puppies and kittens, and lion cubs etc good battle straight could go either way still
Thanks for the educated votes! I loved straights verse think it was it was really well thought out. Just gunna drop a quick expo- the way the mother is holding the baby from her mouth is the way that dogs and cats hold their puppies and kittens, and lion cubs etc good battle straight could go either way still
rthyming : Tie
Vocabulary : both were basic same level
Topic/Meaning : both were good...
Storytelling/Progression : verity
Emotion : both were on same level
Imagery : both tie
Poetic Techniques : nice from both
Ending : both were good./...
Overall : both were on same level...ma Vote goes To Verity..
rthyming : Tie
Vocabulary : both were basic same level
Topic/Meaning : both were good...
Storytelling/Progression : verity
Emotion : both were on same level
Imagery : both tie
Poetic Techniques : nice from both
Ending : both were good./...
Overall : both were on same level...ma Vote goes To Verity..
4-0? I believe it's yours Verity. Pretty sure thats the rule right? Good stuff, good luck furthur in the tournament.
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4-0? I believe it's yours Verity. Pretty sure thats the rule right? Good stuff, good luck furthur in the tournament.
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2011 Rookie Of The Year Nominee
Ranked 4 In September 2011.
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Qualified For All Star Tourney #1 2011 Host of "Noob" Ranked Tourney # 1 Host Of "Noob" Ranked Tourney # 2