ATTENTION ATTENION ATTENION

[YC]

Originally Posted by Babylon

Stop sleeping on the track side, we should be FLOCKING to any member putting shit out seriously not relentlessly avoiding it..

Onto the track, energy was lit which seems to be one of your recurring strong suits that I really fuck with. The only thing I can see that would up the ante for your style would be taking more time on the creative writing/concept side of the punches, coming with some deeper complexity in the wp/punches/similes/etc. Would take it from sonically acceptable dopeness to absolute heavyweight heat

I appreciate the constructive criticism bro

[YC]

Originally Posted by Babylon

Stop sleeping on the track side, we should be FLOCKING to any member putting shit out seriously not relentlessly avoiding it..

Onto the track, energy was lit which seems to be one of your recurring strong suits that I really fuck with. The only thing I can see that would up the ante for your style would be taking more time on the creative writing/concept side of the punches, coming with some deeper complexity in the wp/punches/similes/etc. Would take it from sonically acceptable dopeness to absolute heavyweight heat

I appreciate the constructive criticism bro