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Carlos Brigante · #11 07-26-2010, 03:45 PM

Since ya'll @ this Rule wna give this one a shot...

watch how i turn NERDS to VICTIMS a new breed im ah'crow-bat dis rook wit hooks dat'll backWARDS n FLIP EM & knock teeth out so wen ock reach out he can pik up his WORDS OF WISDOM[!!!](cmon!) ock STARTIN A TEAM? im ah pull out and pull back like im PARKIN DIS THING till it SPARK n IT STEAM! so if its 'tention it be' cuz it took 7 months to be 'mentioned wit me' i make it DARK IN his DREAMS wen i lights out dis pussy's MARKETIN SCHEME[!!!] jed's GROWIN DEM FLOWS! so if he 'makes me' step up like stair masters & 'greats be' im ah SLAP SHOTZ like 'gretzky' till he wonders whos THROWIN DEM HOEZ! its evident i EXTINGUISH a NIGGA wit LESS FLAME and RELINQUISH dis TRIGGA in CHEST FRAMES cuz its 'king over pawn' wen i say aint no beatin dis "rook" if u MASTERED and FINISH a CHESS GAME[!!!]

Carlos Brigante · 07-26-2010, 03:45 PM

Since ya'll @ this Rule wna give this one a shot...

watch how i turn NERDS to VICTIMS a new breed im ah'crow-bat dis rook wit hooks dat'll backWARDS n FLIP EM & knock teeth out so wen ock reach out he can pik up his WORDS OF WISDOM[!!!](cmon!) ock STARTIN A TEAM? im ah pull out and pull back like im PARKIN DIS THING till it SPARK n IT STEAM! so if its 'tention it be' cuz it took 7 months to be 'mentioned wit me' i make it DARK IN his DREAMS wen i lights out dis pussy's MARKETIN SCHEME[!!!] jed's GROWIN DEM FLOWS! so if he 'makes me' step up like stair masters & 'greats be' im ah SLAP SHOTZ like 'gretzky' till he wonders whos THROWIN DEM HOEZ! its evident i EXTINGUISH a NIGGA wit LESS FLAME and RELINQUISH dis TRIGGA in CHEST FRAMES cuz its 'king over pawn' wen i say aint no beatin dis "rook" if u MASTERED and FINISH a CHESS GAME[!!!]

**Mayneak** · #12 07-26-2010, 04:15 PM

Since ya'll @ this Rule wna give this one a shot...

watch how i turn NERDS to VICTIMS a new breed im ah'crow-bat dis rook wit hooks dat'll backWARDS n FLIP EM & knock teeth out so wen ock reach out he can pik up his WORDS OF WISDOM[!!!](cmon!) ock STARTIN A TEAM? im ah pull out and pull back like im PARKIN DIS THING till it SPARK n IT STEAM! so if its 'tention it be' cuz it took 7 months to be 'mentioned wit me' i make it DARK IN his DREAMS wen i lights out dis pussy's MARKETIN SCHEME[!!!] jed's GROWIN DEM FLOWS! so if he 'makes me' step up like stair masters & 'greats be' im ah SLAP SHOTZ like 'gretzky' till he wonders whos THROWIN DEM HOEZ! its evident i EXTINGUISH a NIGGA wit LESS FLAME and RELINQUISH dis TRIGGA in CHEST FRAMES cuz its 'king over pawn' wen i say aint no beatin dis "rook" if u MASTERED and FINISH a CHESS GAME[!!!]

Wack, 0!...

**Mayneak** · 07-26-2010, 04:15 PM

Since ya'll @ this Rule wna give this one a shot...

watch how i turn NERDS to VICTIMS a new breed im ah'crow-bat dis rook wit hooks dat'll backWARDS n FLIP EM & knock teeth out so wen ock reach out he can pik up his WORDS OF WISDOM[!!!](cmon!) ock STARTIN A TEAM? im ah pull out and pull back like im PARKIN DIS THING till it SPARK n IT STEAM! so if its 'tention it be' cuz it took 7 months to be 'mentioned wit me' i make it DARK IN his DREAMS wen i lights out dis pussy's MARKETIN SCHEME[!!!] jed's GROWIN DEM FLOWS! so if he 'makes me' step up like stair masters & 'greats be' im ah SLAP SHOTZ like 'gretzky' till he wonders whos THROWIN DEM HOEZ! its evident i EXTINGUISH a NIGGA wit LESS FLAME and RELINQUISH dis TRIGGA in CHEST FRAMES cuz its 'king over pawn' wen i say aint no beatin dis "rook" if u MASTERED and FINISH a CHESS GAME[!!!]

Wack, 0!...