2013 GC RD.3 - Fidel Z Vs. Phroxen (Phroxen Wins 3-1 TKO)

[Dysfunctional]

Fidel Z: Good concept. Story was a bit scattered not a fluid stream of progression you know? The multis were ok some were great and some were a bit basic. Overall Decent Piece.

Phroxen: One problem was it took me to midway through to figure out what the story was exactly. The beginning was kinda shaky. But thats just me being nitpicky. Overall a really excellent verse though. Multis on point. Story was fantastic. It progressed smoothly. Usually I hate topicals that start and end on the same stanza. But in this case it worked well cuz the first time you read it you think what the fuck does that have to do with this then by the end you figure out how it relates very well done. Overall both worthy of the 3rd round but only one can move on.

MVGT: Phroxen

[Dysfunctional]

Fidel Z: Good concept. Story was a bit scattered not a fluid stream of progression you know? The multis were ok some were great and some were a bit basic. Overall Decent Piece.

Phroxen: One problem was it took me to midway through to figure out what the story was exactly. The beginning was kinda shaky. But thats just me being nitpicky. Overall a really excellent verse though. Multis on point. Story was fantastic. It progressed smoothly. Usually I hate topicals that start and end on the same stanza. But in this case it worked well cuz the first time you read it you think what the fuck does that have to do with this then by the end you figure out how it relates very well done. Overall both worthy of the 3rd round but only one can move on.

MVGT: Phroxen