Onaroll - Your rhyming was your biggest problem in my opinion, you had way too many words between your rhymes in places & it all just seemed basic with the 1-2 syllable schemes. Your flow was off too, it was too routine. Every rhyme was just like 8 words then the rhyme, so none of it really suprised you. Also the story itself wasn't very impressive either.
Lil Fidel Z - More impressive rhymes than your opponent but you could have done better based on your other shit imo. The story wasn't all too great but I feel your flow alone could have taken this. I liked the story, but it should have had a better ending. Pretty nice premise.
Vote: Lil Fidel Z
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