Just Do It w/ Lyrics I need a doctor instrumental

[MidwayMonstersProd]

there is advice and their is being a critic.. you sir do have good points but there are parts that are just something a critic would say.. i appreciate your advice and will take those points into consideration but i would also like to point out how many multisyllabe rhymes there was in that.. the hook was off i agree.. i am currently trying to gather some funds to get a beat making software so i can teach myself.. and im not on a pedestal i am the guy who is shining the boots to the guy on the pedestal trying to work my way up in the food chain.. have you ever listened to Foolish Pride eminems first song.. its not the greatest but now not one rapper can diss him..this was just an encouragment song.. im writin about a personal experience right now when i lost the girl of my dreams.. its 4 parts and the hook is one of my better ones.. im just using instrumentals until like i said get the money and stuff.. plus im going to get scholarships for being smart and basketball so im goin to college for music producing.. i will incorporate what you said though and i will make a few songs that are storys to tell you about myself.. thanks for taking the time to type that out i do appreciate the advice..

[MidwayMonstersProd]

there is advice and their is being a critic.. you sir do have good points but there are parts that are just something a critic would say.. i appreciate your advice and will take those points into consideration but i would also like to point out how many multisyllabe rhymes there was in that.. the hook was off i agree.. i am currently trying to gather some funds to get a beat making software so i can teach myself.. and im not on a pedestal i am the guy who is shining the boots to the guy on the pedestal trying to work my way up in the food chain.. have you ever listened to Foolish Pride eminems first song.. its not the greatest but now not one rapper can diss him..this was just an encouragment song.. im writin about a personal experience right now when i lost the girl of my dreams.. its 4 parts and the hook is one of my better ones.. im just using instrumentals until like i said get the money and stuff.. plus im going to get scholarships for being smart and basketball so im goin to college for music producing.. i will incorporate what you said though and i will make a few songs that are storys to tell you about myself.. thanks for taking the time to type that out i do appreciate the advice..