Just Do It w/ Lyrics I need a doctor instrumental

[MidwayMonstersProd]

Just Do It w/ Lyrics On Screen - YouTube

Just Do It w/ Lyrics On Screen - YouTube

This if my first song and its better than half of the new school rappers getting paid millions to say one word over and over.. Anyway check it out its dope.. Help me get recognized.. Subscribe, Comment, And Like

[MidwayMonstersProd]

Just Do It w/ Lyrics On Screen - YouTube

Just Do It w/ Lyrics On Screen - YouTube

This if my first song and its better than half of the new school rappers getting paid millions to say one word over and over.. Anyway check it out its dope.. Help me get recognized.. Subscribe, Comment, And Like

[V3numb]

like we said.. you flow,breaths and confidence need work

this is a beat you spazz and let your heart on tho.. you kinda did the opposite

[V3numb]

like we said.. you flow,breaths and confidence need work

this is a beat you spazz and let your heart on tho.. you kinda did the opposite

[MidwayMonstersProd]

i dont get the second part and im experimenting with stuff and figuring every thing out

[MidwayMonstersProd]

i dont get the second part and im experimenting with stuff and figuring every thing out

[Top Tyr]

Gonna be real, if I knew you in real life this is the advice I would be giving you. Anyone who complements this are being sarcastic, I feel that the best thing you have is your writing, and even then it's below average, on a basic level of rhyme(especially on the hook), tutorials on writing bars would come in useful, then look at additional tutorials such as multi-syllables etc, give us some metaphors and bring some personals in so we can relate to you when you rap, we learn nothing about you. The presence is not there, if making music is your passion i'm not hearing any conviction in your voice to prove it. When reading the lyrics you made some mistakes, you have to prefect a song to the point where you know it off by heart. If you are gonna sing you need to learn a lot about ranges and singing techniques in general. I would suggest you step down of your pedestal and revamp your style, look at different artists and how they come across, don't mimic them just look at how they are successful in what they do, you need charisma, likability in the character you portray in your raps too as in this you are trying to motivate us. When you have your rap on lock, and you are comfortable with your ability, production is key, rappers who can't produce are too reliant on producers to give them beats which would then make the rapper make a song around it, doing it that way isn't great as there is much more talent and potential that will go into an original song, if you play any instruments that will be a good starting point, play of that..make some basic beats and get better with practice just like your rapping. I don't want to discourage you from doing what you love as I know this is your first and you will get better, but if you really want to step up your game you need some serious practice.

[Top Tyr]

Gonna be real, if I knew you in real life this is the advice I would be giving you. Anyone who complements this are being sarcastic, I feel that the best thing you have is your writing, and even then it's below average, on a basic level of rhyme(especially on the hook), tutorials on writing bars would come in useful, then look at additional tutorials such as multi-syllables etc, give us some metaphors and bring some personals in so we can relate to you when you rap, we learn nothing about you. The presence is not there, if making music is your passion i'm not hearing any conviction in your voice to prove it. When reading the lyrics you made some mistakes, you have to prefect a song to the point where you know it off by heart. If you are gonna sing you need to learn a lot about ranges and singing techniques in general. I would suggest you step down of your pedestal and revamp your style, look at different artists and how they come across, don't mimic them just look at how they are successful in what they do, you need charisma, likability in the character you portray in your raps too as in this you are trying to motivate us. When you have your rap on lock, and you are comfortable with your ability, production is key, rappers who can't produce are too reliant on producers to give them beats which would then make the rapper make a song around it, doing it that way isn't great as there is much more talent and potential that will go into an original song, if you play any instruments that will be a good starting point, play of that..make some basic beats and get better with practice just like your rapping. I don't want to discourage you from doing what you love as I know this is your first and you will get better, but if you really want to step up your game you need some serious practice.

[MidwayMonstersProd]

there is advice and their is being a critic.. you sir do have good points but there are parts that are just something a critic would say.. i appreciate your advice and will take those points into consideration but i would also like to point out how many multisyllabe rhymes there was in that.. the hook was off i agree.. i am currently trying to gather some funds to get a beat making software so i can teach myself.. and im not on a pedestal i am the guy who is shining the boots to the guy on the pedestal trying to work my way up in the food chain.. have you ever listened to Foolish Pride eminems first song.. its not the greatest but now not one rapper can diss him..this was just an encouragment song.. im writin about a personal experience right now when i lost the girl of my dreams.. its 4 parts and the hook is one of my better ones.. im just using instrumentals until like i said get the money and stuff.. plus im going to get scholarships for being smart and basketball so im goin to college for music producing.. i will incorporate what you said though and i will make a few songs that are storys to tell you about myself.. thanks for taking the time to type that out i do appreciate the advice..

[MidwayMonstersProd]

there is advice and their is being a critic.. you sir do have good points but there are parts that are just something a critic would say.. i appreciate your advice and will take those points into consideration but i would also like to point out how many multisyllabe rhymes there was in that.. the hook was off i agree.. i am currently trying to gather some funds to get a beat making software so i can teach myself.. and im not on a pedestal i am the guy who is shining the boots to the guy on the pedestal trying to work my way up in the food chain.. have you ever listened to Foolish Pride eminems first song.. its not the greatest but now not one rapper can diss him..this was just an encouragment song.. im writin about a personal experience right now when i lost the girl of my dreams.. its 4 parts and the hook is one of my better ones.. im just using instrumentals until like i said get the money and stuff.. plus im going to get scholarships for being smart and basketball so im goin to college for music producing.. i will incorporate what you said though and i will make a few songs that are storys to tell you about myself.. thanks for taking the time to type that out i do appreciate the advice..