Track Feedback - Lets Beef

**FreezyCT** · #1 01-07-2013, 11:02 AM

im opening this thread for anyone who has music they feel is being slept on...i do my best to run through all the new songs of the week, but im sure i miss alot of them...heres an opportunity to get some feedback and maybe a few views...if i fed your track already, dont bother posting it - this is for the ones ive missed

**FreezyCT** · 01-07-2013, 11:02 AM

im opening this thread for anyone who has music they feel is being slept on...i do my best to run through all the new songs of the week, but im sure i miss alot of them...heres an opportunity to get some feedback and maybe a few views...if i fed your track already, dont bother posting it - this is for the ones ive missed

**Phil Banks** · #2 01-07-2013, 12:46 PM

felt this kinda ggot slept on lemme get some truth on it

**Phil Banks** · 01-07-2013, 12:46 PM

felt this kinda ggot slept on lemme get some truth on it

**FreezyCT** · #3 01-07-2013, 01:22 PM

ran through this twice...i love how you capture your emtion in your lines, really helps paint the picture...this beat was a great find, love the hook...the beat is a tad too low for my taste, makes the vocals alittle to powerful - but that could be viewed as a good thing...personal preference

how many vocal tracks do you finish with?

**FreezyCT** · 01-07-2013, 01:22 PM

ran through this twice...i love how you capture your emtion in your lines, really helps paint the picture...this beat was a great find, love the hook...the beat is a tad too low for my taste, makes the vocals alittle to powerful - but that could be viewed as a good thing...personal preference

how many vocal tracks do you finish with?

**Phil Banks** · #4 01-07-2013, 03:28 PM

2 max if i'm punchin in

**Phil Banks** · 01-07-2013, 03:28 PM

2 max if i'm punchin in

#5 01-07-2013, 03:57 PM

Something Light Fam .. I'm The First Verse And Hook

01-07-2013, 03:57 PM

Something Light Fam .. I'm The First Verse And Hook

**FreezyCT** · #6 01-07-2013, 04:40 PM

@Phil - try this out once...keep 3 vocals, pan one to the left and one to the right, and keep one in the middle...right now, i feel like your sound is too centered

@vandal i got you

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the quality really takes away from this track...its hard to make out all of your vocals...the beat is heartfelt and what i did catch i liked...you rode the beat well, and the hook is perfect, just work on that presence...your vocals also have a centered sound, try panning some vocals like i stated above

**FreezyCT** · 01-07-2013, 04:40 PM

@Phil - try this out once...keep 3 vocals, pan one to the left and one to the right, and keep one in the middle...right now, i feel like your sound is too centered

@vandal i got you

---------- Post added at 04:40 PM ---------- Previous post was at 04:36 PM ----------

the quality really takes away from this track...its hard to make out all of your vocals...the beat is heartfelt and what i did catch i liked...you rode the beat well, and the hook is perfect, just work on that presence...your vocals also have a centered sound, try panning some vocals like i stated above

#7 01-07-2013, 04:47 PM

Most Def Thanks Fam!

01-07-2013, 04:47 PM

Most Def Thanks Fam!

**FreezyCT** · #8 01-08-2013, 01:52 PM

bumping this

**FreezyCT** · 01-08-2013, 01:52 PM

bumping this

**Phil Banks** · #9 01-08-2013, 02:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by FreezyCT

@Phil - try this out once...keep 3 vocals, pan one to the left and one to the right, and keep one in the middle...right now, i feel like your sound is too centered

@vandal i got you

---------- Post added at 04:40 PM ---------- Previous post was at 04:36 PM ----------

the quality really takes away from this track...its hard to make out all of your vocals...the beat is heartfelt and what i did catch i liked...you rode the beat well, and the hook is perfect, just work on that presence...your vocals also have a centered sound, try panning some vocals like i stated above

yo i got half a track done now ima try that with the vocals now just to see what it sounds like ill post it up when I'm done

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aight freeze this with 3 tracks the main has more volume i dunno give me a listen lemme know song isn't done jus posted to see how it sounded

**Phil Banks** · 01-08-2013, 02:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by FreezyCT

@Phil - try this out once...keep 3 vocals, pan one to the left and one to the right, and keep one in the middle...right now, i feel like your sound is too centered

@vandal i got you

---------- Post added at 04:40 PM ---------- Previous post was at 04:36 PM ----------

the quality really takes away from this track...its hard to make out all of your vocals...the beat is heartfelt and what i did catch i liked...you rode the beat well, and the hook is perfect, just work on that presence...your vocals also have a centered sound, try panning some vocals like i stated above

yo i got half a track done now ima try that with the vocals now just to see what it sounds like ill post it up when I'm done

---------- Post added at 12:28 AM ---------- Previous post was at 12:08 AM ----------

aight freeze this with 3 tracks the main has more volume i dunno give me a listen lemme know song isn't done jus posted to see how it sounded