WALLS ARE CLOSING

[METH_BARZ]

I never felt this much pain
I guess I finally got a taste of hell cause I feel like I live in flames
faint screams in my head like distant trains
who is this guy I think this kids insane
so quit winding him up
I'm only tryin to travle my path but my roads whindy as fuck
so I crash alot when I try to shift them lanes
plus theres always a new boulder in my path that I gotta lift like cranes
we all have our own personel cells but how the fuck we get hooked to chains
tell me whos ta blame
tears flowing kinda looks like rain
with these sobs I own it
aint no light in this world even when the stars are glowin
feelin like I'm clasterphobic
ain't no hallways open
when you feel like the walls are closin

[METH_BARZ]

I never felt this much pain
I guess I finally got a taste of hell cause I feel like I live in flames
faint screams in my head like distant trains
who is this guy I think this kids insane
so quit winding him up
I'm only tryin to travle my path but my roads whindy as fuck
so I crash alot when I try to shift them lanes
plus theres always a new boulder in my path that I gotta lift like cranes
we all have our own personel cells but how the fuck we get hooked to chains
tell me whos ta blame
tears flowing kinda looks like rain
with these sobs I own it
aint no light in this world even when the stars are glowin
feelin like I'm clasterphobic
ain't no hallways open
when you feel like the walls are closin

[Black Book]

Good piece. It flowed well and was clear. The imagery was solid. The idea wasn't that creative, though. It's been done a lot, but it's whatever. It was still a good piece.

[Black Book]

Good piece. It flowed well and was clear. The imagery was solid. The idea wasn't that creative, though. It's been done a lot, but it's whatever. It was still a good piece.

[METH_BARZ]

yea this was just a quick verse I started writting over the summer that was originally gonna be for audio then I went blank and never finished it

[METH_BARZ]

yea this was just a quick verse I started writting over the summer that was originally gonna be for audio then I went blank and never finished it

[Erupt da Monsta]

nice shit for a quick verse, we need more quick joints like this around... just to keep things active... even if its just somthin you feel at the time... i'd say the vocab could be upped a lil, fix the structure... the content was dope.. and had some quotable lines no doubt... keep dishin these out homie

[Erupt da Monsta]

nice shit for a quick verse, we need more quick joints like this around... just to keep things active... even if its just somthin you feel at the time... i'd say the vocab could be upped a lil, fix the structure... the content was dope.. and had some quotable lines no doubt... keep dishin these out homie