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Unread 09-27-2012, 09:41 PM
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Default Punchlines and wordplay examples please

Rhyming
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Alliteration - beginning constants
Consonance - constants
Assonance - vowels
Multi-Syllable rhyme

His p(al)ms are sw(ea)ty, knees w(ea)k, (ar)ms are h(ea)vy
There’s vomit on his sweater already, mom’s spaghe(tti)<--
He’s nervous, but on the surface he looks calm and ready
To drop b(om)bs, but he keeps (on) forge(tti)ng<--
-Eminem, “Lose Yourself”


Simile (similar to) & metaphor (equal to)
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shadows are like an enemy
shadows are your enemy


Insinuations (intended to foreshadow)
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???????????????????????


Hidden Meaning
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understand that, while I'm coming for your cash (a riddle meaning confusion)
confusion is an enemy, I warned you in the past (confirms foreshadowing)

beat her <to the moon> (really badly)


double meanings or of like sound (puns=joke exploiting dble meaning/ of like snd)
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had to tip my masseuse, to rub me the right way
I play with the pussy and the pussy plays me (different meanings ^)


Impartial Sentence Structure / Substitution
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I rip her ass <to> steroids (as if I were on)


Imaginative Figurative Exaggerated (not Literal)
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I roll with the wheel (using a wheel, not literal)


acronym and spelling
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A.M.
P I M P


Vocabulary
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Word List



Punchlines (clever insults, diss)
read my mind, did ur mama cut your hair, or is your barber blind?





Is there more to word play?

Last edited by thenumber; 09-28-2012 at 03:29 AM.
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Default Punchlines and wordplay examples please

Rhyming
_______________________________
Alliteration - beginning constants
Consonance - constants
Assonance - vowels
Multi-Syllable rhyme

His p(al)ms are sw(ea)ty, knees w(ea)k, (ar)ms are h(ea)vy
There’s vomit on his sweater already, mom’s spaghe(tti)<--
He’s nervous, but on the surface he looks calm and ready
To drop b(om)bs, but he keeps (on) forge(tti)ng<--
-Eminem, “Lose Yourself”


Simile (similar to) & metaphor (equal to)
_______________________________
shadows are like an enemy
shadows are your enemy


Insinuations (intended to foreshadow)
_______________________________
???????????????????????


Hidden Meaning
_______________________________
understand that, while I'm coming for your cash (a riddle meaning confusion)
confusion is an enemy, I warned you in the past (confirms foreshadowing)

beat her <to the moon> (really badly)


double meanings or of like sound (puns=joke exploiting dble meaning/ of like snd)
_______________________________
had to tip my masseuse, to rub me the right way
I play with the pussy and the pussy plays me (different meanings ^)


Impartial Sentence Structure / Substitution
_______________________________
I rip her ass <to> steroids (as if I were on)


Imaginative Figurative Exaggerated (not Literal)
_______________________________
I roll with the wheel (using a wheel, not literal)


acronym and spelling
_______________________________
A.M.
P I M P


Vocabulary
_______________________________
Word List



Punchlines (clever insults, diss)
read my mind, did ur mama cut your hair, or is your barber blind?





Is there more to word play?

Last edited by thenumber; 09-28-2012 at 03:29 AM.
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Unread 09-28-2012, 03:55 PM
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Wordplay//// you got a "news sense" I'm "a frayed knot"/// I "pull strings" got you feeling "tied up" y'all "nuisances" in a neck lock/// my "head" stays on chocking bitches I got a "noose sense" gettin brain clots//:
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Wordplay//// you got a "news sense" I'm "a frayed knot"/// I "pull strings" got you feeling "tied up" y'all "nuisances" in a neck lock/// my "head" stays on chocking bitches I got a "noose sense" gettin brain clots//:
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Unread 10-23-2012, 09:58 AM
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Kill yourself
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Unread 10-23-2012, 11:02 PM
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Kill yourself
What's up with this troll everywhere? Go on somewhere.
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Unread 10-23-2012, 11:26 PM
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31 Won / 3 Lost
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@thenumber you make a thread about writing but have yet to win a single battle?

Forgive me if i am confused here......
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@thenumber you make a thread about writing but have yet to win a single battle?

Forgive me if i am confused here......
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Unread 10-24-2012, 09:15 AM
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The Icing on the cake to perfecting wordplay is cadence and delivery the tone and the emotion you give it to make it stand out ... thats why I encourage texters to spit audio to learn the tricks of the trade SHRUGS oh well and For the record I feel theres is alot of ppl on this site who need to really look at what they are saying in a verse b4 spitting it ... 100
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The Icing on the cake to perfecting wordplay is cadence and delivery the tone and the emotion you give it to make it stand out ... thats why I encourage texters to spit audio to learn the tricks of the trade SHRUGS oh well and For the record I feel theres is alot of ppl on this site who need to really look at what they are saying in a verse b4 spitting it ... 100
 
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The Icing on the cake to perfecting wordplay is cadence and delivery the tone and the emotion you give it to make it stand out ... thats why I encourage texters to spit audio to learn the tricks of the trade SHRUGS oh well and For the record I feel theres is alot of ppl on this site who need to really look at what they are saying in a verse b4 spitting it ... 100
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The Icing on the cake to perfecting wordplay is cadence and delivery the tone and the emotion you give it to make it stand out ... thats why I encourage texters to spit audio to learn the tricks of the trade SHRUGS oh well and For the record I feel theres is alot of ppl on this site who need to really look at what they are saying in a verse b4 spitting it ... 100
co sign with the texters on the audio scene
 
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