Wheres Ashton?

[GRizzEAT]

Originally Posted by Phenomonon

2 things i want looked at... How many lines of inner rhymes does Olde have and isss Grizz reaalllyyy tryna cOaCHH miii oN Wordiiin izzues?? Shiiii whatchu saying yooo?? http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=444661

Imma need u not to eveeeer do that again

1) Its not whaaa he rhymed, its whaaa he said n how he said it

2) Rule voted against u too Big Doggy:o

[GRizzEAT]

Originally Posted by Phenomonon

2 things i want looked at... How many lines of inner rhymes does Olde have and isss Grizz reaalllyyy tryna cOaCHH miii oN Wordiiin izzues?? Shiiii whatchu saying yooo?? http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=444661

Imma need u not to eveeeer do that again

1) Its not whaaa he rhymed, its whaaa he said n how he said it

2) Rule voted against u too Big Doggy:o

[Apollyon]

Originally Posted by GRizzEAT

Imma need u not to eveeeer do that again

1) Its not whaaa he rhymed, its whaaa he said n how he said it

2) Rule voted against u too Big Doggy:o

Fuck who voted for who and what he said, all i wanna know is what bar are you talking about and how should i have worded it??

[Apollyon]

Originally Posted by GRizzEAT

Imma need u not to eveeeer do that again

1) Its not whaaa he rhymed, its whaaa he said n how he said it

2) Rule voted against u too Big Doggy:o

Fuck who voted for who and what he said, all i wanna know is what bar are you talking about and how should i have worded it??

[IV]

Originally Posted by Phenomonon

Fuck who voted for who and what he said, all i wanna know is what bar are you talking about and how should i have worded it??

Wording comes natural with practice. Don't worry about what you SHOULD have done differently in that battle and just think about wording when putting together your next verse, I didn't notice much wrong with it though tbh. That was a sick battle, really underrated, I think Olde got the win but deff potential in you both so just keep going..

[IV]

Originally Posted by Phenomonon

Fuck who voted for who and what he said, all i wanna know is what bar are you talking about and how should i have worded it??

Wording comes natural with practice. Don't worry about what you SHOULD have done differently in that battle and just think about wording when putting together your next verse, I didn't notice much wrong with it though tbh. That was a sick battle, really underrated, I think Olde got the win but deff potential in you both so just keep going..

[Apollyon]

Originally Posted by Verity

Wording comes natural with practice. Don't worry about what you SHOULD have done differently in that battle and just think about wording when putting together your next verse, I didn't notice much wrong with it though tbh. That was a sick battle, really underrated, I think Olde got the win but deff potential in you both so just keep going..

Thanks.. If given an example of what i did wrong wording wise then i wont make the same mistake twice though... Saying my wording wasn't good and i need to practice doesn't help...

[Apollyon]

Originally Posted by Verity

Wording comes natural with practice. Don't worry about what you SHOULD have done differently in that battle and just think about wording when putting together your next verse, I didn't notice much wrong with it though tbh. That was a sick battle, really underrated, I think Olde got the win but deff potential in you both so just keep going..

Thanks.. If given an example of what i did wrong wording wise then i wont make the same mistake twice though... Saying my wording wasn't good and i need to practice doesn't help...