FVC Membership Contest Round 1 (Text)

[Teek]

Erupt Vs. Unyqe http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=442891
Erupt: FyaWurdz: 3 /*** _Lizman_: 5
Unyqe: FyaWurdz: 6 /*** _Lizman_: 7
Expo:
@FyaWurdz -
"Stay away from multis like WEAK OR TOO".. They were capped for no reason n messes up the flow." - "Mix that in with broken multies ...."
Capping ANY WORD DOES NOT MAKE IT A MULTI, nor does whether it being capped or not HAVE ANYTHING TO DO WITH FLOW. Neither of you picked up on his cadence and found the multi scheme. Both of you copped out saying he had broken multi's when he didn't. I found his scheme easily and almost spit it on audio just so you could hear the flow. Is it a weak verse? Yes, but it is nicely structured by him, everything flows fine and he had no broken multis in his scheme.
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@_Lizman_ - "multies that didnt work " - " U have a problem with multis aswell."
Lizman also got busted for multis. Liz had 2 minor broken multis in his verse, depending on pronunciation of HANDLING, he put an A in "Handling a steak", and had a syl difference in another bar. His flow and cadence were fine besides that.
Liz also got busted for punches and taking too long to deliver punches. Liz had a punch in every bar, and though ones like in the first bar are light, they are there.


*start verse***I Hook Worm With The Claw, No Matter The ANGLES HE TAKES,
Cause He Ain't 'Toe To Toe' To My 'Brilliance', No SANDALS AND SHADES,
Boys Put 'Sticks' In His 'Flower' Without CANDLES AND CAKES
To 'Insert Leads' And Turn This 'Dead Beat' Into A 'White Out' Like GANDALF THE GREY!!! (Flour)
You Ain't 'CLOSE' To My 'MENTAL' MAKE, No SPANDEX AND CAPES,
Cause I CLOAK YOUR DENTAL TASTE With HANDMADE WANK PASTE,
This Fag's A 'Bear' I Rip His 'Paws' Like CANCELLING BREAK
And Put The 'Blade To His Grill' Without HANDLING A STEAK!! (Clothes, Mantle)
Have Him Shook Through My Lightwork Like LANTERNS THAT SHAKE...****end verse***

Overall view:
Either neither of you bothered to 'read into' each verse, or you're not capable of doing so.

Honestly, I don't care to see anyone who can't get what the spitter is doing in FVC and don't want to give either of you a point.
It really wasn't a difficult battle to vote on. There was a clear winner and loser and even the scoring should have been fair enough.
Choice: NEITHER ONE OF YOU

[Teek]

Erupt Vs. Unyqe http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=442891
Erupt: FyaWurdz: 3 /*** _Lizman_: 5
Unyqe: FyaWurdz: 6 /*** _Lizman_: 7
Expo:
@FyaWurdz -
"Stay away from multis like WEAK OR TOO".. They were capped for no reason n messes up the flow." - "Mix that in with broken multies ...."
Capping ANY WORD DOES NOT MAKE IT A MULTI, nor does whether it being capped or not HAVE ANYTHING TO DO WITH FLOW. Neither of you picked up on his cadence and found the multi scheme. Both of you copped out saying he had broken multi's when he didn't. I found his scheme easily and almost spit it on audio just so you could hear the flow. Is it a weak verse? Yes, but it is nicely structured by him, everything flows fine and he had no broken multis in his scheme.
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@_Lizman_ - "multies that didnt work " - " U have a problem with multis aswell."
Lizman also got busted for multis. Liz had 2 minor broken multis in his verse, depending on pronunciation of HANDLING, he put an A in "Handling a steak", and had a syl difference in another bar. His flow and cadence were fine besides that.
Liz also got busted for punches and taking too long to deliver punches. Liz had a punch in every bar, and though ones like in the first bar are light, they are there.


*start verse***I Hook Worm With The Claw, No Matter The ANGLES HE TAKES,
Cause He Ain't 'Toe To Toe' To My 'Brilliance', No SANDALS AND SHADES,
Boys Put 'Sticks' In His 'Flower' Without CANDLES AND CAKES
To 'Insert Leads' And Turn This 'Dead Beat' Into A 'White Out' Like GANDALF THE GREY!!! (Flour)
You Ain't 'CLOSE' To My 'MENTAL' MAKE, No SPANDEX AND CAPES,
Cause I CLOAK YOUR DENTAL TASTE With HANDMADE WANK PASTE,
This Fag's A 'Bear' I Rip His 'Paws' Like CANCELLING BREAK
And Put The 'Blade To His Grill' Without HANDLING A STEAK!! (Clothes, Mantle)
Have Him Shook Through My Lightwork Like LANTERNS THAT SHAKE...****end verse***

Overall view:
Either neither of you bothered to 'read into' each verse, or you're not capable of doing so.

Honestly, I don't care to see anyone who can't get what the spitter is doing in FVC and don't want to give either of you a point.
It really wasn't a difficult battle to vote on. There was a clear winner and loser and even the scoring should have been fair enough.
Choice: NEITHER ONE OF YOU