My Latest Battle - Page 2 - Lets Beef

**FAME** · #11 05-30-2012, 07:32 AM

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Originally Posted by Mike-G

Honestly, Fame, you got bodied. I wouldn't even have posted that shit here cause I'd be too embarrassed. I can understand when Plaudit was saying it was "uncomfortable" to watch, especially if we look at you as the person representing LetsBeef in that battle. If you put that here to get advice, then I can understand. In that case, pretty much what everyone else is saying...you choked a few times and the fat jokes were a bit redundant.
You'll need to think about what made you choke and work on that....and also go after your opponent from more angles. The fat jokes didn't really hit that hard cause she wasn't that fat. She was chubby, but she wasn't obese. Plus when you spent 3 minutes listing all the things you'd do before fucking her, it sort of made you look gay cause I was thinking I'd fuck her. She's chubby, but she's not disgusting so those jokes sort of fell flat. That's just my two pennies homie. Better luck next time.

Take note people... THIS is how you offer constructive criticism!

But yeah... the chokes were down to lack of preparation and being intoxicated... And I realize the mistake I made by not comin from a verity of angles

**FAME** · 05-30-2012, 07:32 AM

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Originally Posted by Mike-G

Honestly, Fame, you got bodied. I wouldn't even have posted that shit here cause I'd be too embarrassed. I can understand when Plaudit was saying it was "uncomfortable" to watch, especially if we look at you as the person representing LetsBeef in that battle. If you put that here to get advice, then I can understand. In that case, pretty much what everyone else is saying...you choked a few times and the fat jokes were a bit redundant.
You'll need to think about what made you choke and work on that....and also go after your opponent from more angles. The fat jokes didn't really hit that hard cause she wasn't that fat. She was chubby, but she wasn't obese. Plus when you spent 3 minutes listing all the things you'd do before fucking her, it sort of made you look gay cause I was thinking I'd fuck her. She's chubby, but she's not disgusting so those jokes sort of fell flat. That's just my two pennies homie. Better luck next time.

Take note people... THIS is how you offer constructive criticism!

But yeah... the chokes were down to lack of preparation and being intoxicated... And I realize the mistake I made by not comin from a verity of angles

**AfterThought** · #12 05-30-2012, 07:35 AM

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Originally Posted by FAME

Take note people... THIS is how you offer constructive criticism!

But yeah... the chokes were down to lack of preparation and being intoxicated... And I realize the mistake I made by not comin from a verity of angles

Pun intended?

**AfterThought** · 05-30-2012, 07:35 AM

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Originally Posted by FAME

Take note people... THIS is how you offer constructive criticism!

But yeah... the chokes were down to lack of preparation and being intoxicated... And I realize the mistake I made by not comin from a verity of angles

Pun intended?

**FAME** · #13 05-30-2012, 07:48 AM

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Originally Posted by AfterThought

Pun intended?

I'll just pretend it was LOL

**FAME** · 05-30-2012, 07:48 AM

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Originally Posted by AfterThought

Pun intended?

I'll just pretend it was LOL

**FAME** · #14 05-30-2012, 02:36 PM

Watch my battle more!

**FAME** · 05-30-2012, 02:36 PM

Watch my battle more!

**Fredo Lombardi** · #15 05-30-2012, 03:47 PM

damn fame she went in on you dude...her voice is fucking annoying though

**Fredo Lombardi** · 05-30-2012, 03:47 PM

damn fame she went in on you dude...her voice is fucking annoying though

**Askari** · #16 05-30-2012, 05:08 PM

Your overall battle with Bloodstro was definitely better, although you have kinda sorted out your delivery here. Change up the jokes though, fat jokes/slut jokes can't carry a whole battle. Get in with those personals man, and remember your fucking bars haha.

**Askari** · 05-30-2012, 05:08 PM

Your overall battle with Bloodstro was definitely better, although you have kinda sorted out your delivery here. Change up the jokes though, fat jokes/slut jokes can't carry a whole battle. Get in with those personals man, and remember your fucking bars haha.