"Fire It Up" - Lets Beef

**John Dos** · #1 07-19-2011, 12:22 AM

**John Dos** · 07-19-2011, 12:22 AM

**Erupt da Monsta** · #2 07-19-2011, 12:57 AM

ait ait, the beat gos hard, i dont fucks with the hook too much tbh my nigga, the flow was a lil choppy in places, also you were takin alotta breaths in this so it didnt come over too smoothly,

maybe chop it up a lil . record different sections of your verse therefore eliminating the breaths.... second and last verse had some real dope moments,

feelin the message here... dont fuck wit the hook too much, fix the breaths and flow.

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**Erupt da Monsta** · 07-19-2011, 12:57 AM

ait ait, the beat gos hard, i dont fucks with the hook too much tbh my nigga, the flow was a lil choppy in places, also you were takin alotta breaths in this so it didnt come over too smoothly,

maybe chop it up a lil . record different sections of your verse therefore eliminating the breaths.... second and last verse had some real dope moments,

feelin the message here... dont fuck wit the hook too much, fix the breaths and flow.

100

**Erupt da Monsta** · #3 07-19-2011, 12:58 AM

lol at you singin hahaha that shit wasnt bad tho yo lololol real talk

**Erupt da Monsta** · 07-19-2011, 12:58 AM

lol at you singin hahaha that shit wasnt bad tho yo lololol real talk

**Erupt da Monsta** · #4 07-19-2011, 01:00 AM

:50 to :57 first part of the first verse where you had the lil singin rap goin was dope, id do a whole interlude usin that verse , like a whole bridge to eliminate the same hook...

lyrics were nice.

**Erupt da Monsta** · 07-19-2011, 01:00 AM

:50 to :57 first part of the first verse where you had the lil singin rap goin was dope, id do a whole interlude usin that verse , like a whole bridge to eliminate the same hook...

lyrics were nice.

**Erupt da Monsta** · #5 07-19-2011, 01:03 AM

2:06 to 2:12 was sick.

**Erupt da Monsta** · 07-19-2011, 01:03 AM

2:06 to 2:12 was sick.

**John Dos** · #6 07-19-2011, 01:12 AM

I tried a different reverb in this one

**John Dos** · 07-19-2011, 01:12 AM

I tried a different reverb in this one

**John Dos** · #7 07-19-2011, 01:13 AM

I think imma keep the reverb in the singing parts only

**John Dos** · 07-19-2011, 01:13 AM

I think imma keep the reverb in the singing parts only

**John Dos** · #8 07-19-2011, 01:20 AM

Uppin.........

**John Dos** · 07-19-2011, 01:20 AM

Uppin.........

**Erupt da Monsta** · #9 07-19-2011, 01:20 AM

word word .

**Erupt da Monsta** · 07-19-2011, 01:20 AM

word word .

**John Dos** · #10 07-19-2011, 11:39 AM

Uppin ......

**John Dos** · 07-19-2011, 11:39 AM

Uppin ......


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