Honest Feedback

[~KiNg KrAzY~]

~KiNg KrAzY~ got A NEW Verse Here...Postin this Up In HERE Strictly to get feedback and advice on ways to tighten flow wordplay punches etc etc etc.....Honest Feedback MUCH APPRECIATED!!!....FAVOR Always Returned...


~*~Mulisha~*~(nough said).....Look.....Understand beatin me's a MIRACLE PUNK consider this a LYRICAL PUNCH/cause I'm BUSTIN DUDES NECK/Go Head SPIN THE WHEEL BEGIN A DEAL either way mark a LOSS DOWN not from MOSCOW/but facin KrAzY's like playin RUSSIAN ROULETTE/trust it's TEMPTIN ta AIM but also SIMPLE n PLAIN/verbal shots hit ya TIMPLE n BRAIN guaranteed ya DIMPLES will STAIN/like FACE MAKE-UP/Trust this QUEER LOVER's gone need 'SHEER COVER' when I TUCK THE SHANK FUCK YA RANK/iss obvious the "letsbeef" PLACE HATES YA!!!!/there's no DEBATE BRUH/it's PLAIN FOLKS this LAME JOKE needs to GROW DEM NUTS holes GO-IN UP/now watch as KiNg escaLATES SLUGS!!!//


ONE LOVE n ++++RESPECT++++



~KiNg--OUT~

~Legit Records CEO~

~*~MIC~*~MELTIN~*~MULISHA~*~ --Undisputed * Cypher * King--

[~KiNg KrAzY~]

~KiNg KrAzY~ got A NEW Verse Here...Postin this Up In HERE Strictly to get feedback and advice on ways to tighten flow wordplay punches etc etc etc.....Honest Feedback MUCH APPRECIATED!!!....FAVOR Always Returned...


~*~Mulisha~*~(nough said).....Look.....Understand beatin me's a MIRACLE PUNK consider this a LYRICAL PUNCH/cause I'm BUSTIN DUDES NECK/Go Head SPIN THE WHEEL BEGIN A DEAL either way mark a LOSS DOWN not from MOSCOW/but facin KrAzY's like playin RUSSIAN ROULETTE/trust it's TEMPTIN ta AIM but also SIMPLE n PLAIN/verbal shots hit ya TIMPLE n BRAIN guaranteed ya DIMPLES will STAIN/like FACE MAKE-UP/Trust this QUEER LOVER's gone need 'SHEER COVER' when I TUCK THE SHANK FUCK YA RANK/iss obvious the "letsbeef" PLACE HATES YA!!!!/there's no DEBATE BRUH/it's PLAIN FOLKS this LAME JOKE needs to GROW DEM NUTS holes GO-IN UP/now watch as KiNg escaLATES SLUGS!!!//


ONE LOVE n ++++RESPECT++++



~KiNg--OUT~

~Legit Records CEO~

~*~MIC~*~MELTIN~*~MULISHA~*~ --Undisputed * Cypher * King--

You suck.
There's your honest feedback.

You suck.
There's your honest feedback.

Originally Posted by Jason

you stole it.. not cool

No, no.
I borrowed it, is all... :o

Originally Posted by Jason

you stole it.. not cool

No, no.
I borrowed it, is all... :o

[Lizman]

@Weezy Wannabe & Jason:

Atleast He's Elevating
Haven't Seen Nothing From You Lately Which Suggested Elevation
If You Don't Have Any Valid Constructive Criticism Then Don't Fuckin Post

@Krazy:

Good Stuff Here Man
Liking The New Thing Your Doing With Your Multies
Some Cool Punches; Keep Grinding Bro

[Lizman]

@Weezy Wannabe & Jason:

Atleast He's Elevating
Haven't Seen Nothing From You Lately Which Suggested Elevation
If You Don't Have Any Valid Constructive Criticism Then Don't Fuckin Post

@Krazy:

Good Stuff Here Man
Liking The New Thing Your Doing With Your Multies
Some Cool Punches; Keep Grinding Bro

[Black Book]

Work on developing creative concepts, add in some wordplay, and more than 3 syllable multies.




You do need a LOT of work to be a top textcee on here though.

[Black Book]

Work on developing creative concepts, add in some wordplay, and more than 3 syllable multies.




You do need a LOT of work to be a top textcee on here though.

[DonAiRE]

Originally Posted by The Black Book

Work on developing creative concepts, add in some wordplay, and more than 3 syllable multies.




You do need a LOT of work to be a top textcee on here though.

BOOK is right.. get some concepts, create some original punchlines, fix the structure a little and keep the flow u have cause its good, or make it better.. good luck King..

[DonAiRE]

Originally Posted by The Black Book

Work on developing creative concepts, add in some wordplay, and more than 3 syllable multies.




You do need a LOT of work to be a top textcee on here though.

BOOK is right.. get some concepts, create some original punchlines, fix the structure a little and keep the flow u have cause its good, or make it better.. good luck King..