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i didnt hate vote your a lier...
POST THE LINK TO THE FUCKIN BATTLE ETH **hear crickets**
EtH lose your virginity please its bad when your 46 on a rap battle site yelling at kids and your still a virgin.
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Man, I can't be beefing with someone who hasen't even been taught the birds and the bees yet,
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09-09-2010, 10:59 PM
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i didnt hate vote your a lier...
POST THE LINK TO THE FUCKIN BATTLE ETH **hear crickets**
EtH lose your virginity please its bad when your 46 on a rap battle site yelling at kids and your still a virgin.
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Man, I can't be beefing with someone who hasen't even been taught the birds and the bees yet,
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09-09-2010, 11:02 PM
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haha you have no idea who i am or what i have done E-Thug/Wigger
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09-09-2010, 11:02 PM
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haha you have no idea who i am or what i have done E-Thug/Wigger
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Y~A, you have some good vocab, but never sacrafice the flow for the point of vocab. Get a strong flow going before you try to complex it up with vocab like that. There are some light ideas, but I think you will need to try hard to get the punchline game going strong. Red, I definently can see the elevation. The punchlines occur at every line, all you need now is to solidify them by continuing to work on their concepts, and work on the external stuff like exocusion, minimising filler etc. Overall, I have a winner with the harder verse, basicly. FV, Return it sometime guys.
dmullz won it for me in the first line. look dmullz had punches and shit while eth had broken multies and ok punches. as usual both lack vocab but dmullz pulled out a little stronger with the vocab. eth some of your concepts were confusing and your rhymes was a bit simplified. in the end one had more complex rhyme with wordplay. not really that great of a battle in my opinion but as always i kept it fair
You just pretty much repeated everything I said to you.
10 Year olds killing in the g-hetto these days?
Trolling is e-thugging?
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Y~A, you have some good vocab, but never sacrafice the flow for the point of vocab. Get a strong flow going before you try to complex it up with vocab like that. There are some light ideas, but I think you will need to try hard to get the punchline game going strong. Red, I definently can see the elevation. The punchlines occur at every line, all you need now is to solidify them by continuing to work on their concepts, and work on the external stuff like exocusion, minimising filler etc. Overall, I have a winner with the harder verse, basicly. FV, Return it sometime guys.
dmullz won it for me in the first line. look dmullz had punches and shit while eth had broken multies and ok punches. as usual both lack vocab but dmullz pulled out a little stronger with the vocab. eth some of your concepts were confusing and your rhymes was a bit simplified. in the end one had more complex rhyme with wordplay. not really that great of a battle in my opinion but as always i kept it fair
You just pretty much repeated everything I said to you.
10 Year olds killing in the g-hetto these days?
Trolling is e-thugging?
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09-09-2010, 11:08 PM
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no i didnt wtf? any idiot can see i didnt
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09-09-2010, 11:08 PM
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no i didnt wtf? any idiot can see i didnt
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09-09-2010, 11:09 PM
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i told you what i thought anyway i vote on at least 10-15 battles a day and leave explainations on every single one.
Most of you lack lines that make me say WOW
even the so called vets that get 9s and 10s dont have WOW lines
and one of my biggest no nos as a emcee is rappers with absolutely no vocab so check yaself eth
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i told you what i thought anyway i vote on at least 10-15 battles a day and leave explainations on every single one.
Most of you lack lines that make me say WOW
even the so called vets that get 9s and 10s dont have WOW lines
and one of my biggest no nos as a emcee is rappers with absolutely no vocab so check yaself eth
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"Broken multies" Yeah man, yeah.
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"Broken multies" Yeah man, yeah.
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09-09-2010, 11:10 PM
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i told you what i thought anyway i vote on at least 10-15 battles a day and leave explainations on every single one.
Most of you lack lines that make me say WOW
even the so called vets that get 9s and 10s dont have WOW lines
and one of my biggest no nos as a emcee is rappers with absolutely no vocab so check yaself eth
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Wow, I guess you dont need to be in any way good yourself to be critical eh?
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Originally Posted by Harvey Dent
i told you what i thought anyway i vote on at least 10-15 battles a day and leave explainations on every single one.
Most of you lack lines that make me say WOW
even the so called vets that get 9s and 10s dont have WOW lines
and one of my biggest no nos as a emcee is rappers with absolutely no vocab so check yaself eth
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Wow, I guess you dont need to be in any way good yourself to be critical eh?
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your obviously dumb
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your obviously dumb
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Your obviously unwanted here...
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Your obviously unwanted here...
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Originally Posted by Harvey Dent
i told you what i thought anyway i vote on at least 10-15 battles a day and leave explainations on every single one.
Most of you lack lines that make me say WOW
even the so called vets that get 9s and 10s dont have WOW lines
and one of my biggest no nos as a emcee is rappers with absolutely no vocab so check yaself eth
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thats because you're too young to get them
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My wins? I always 'planet/plan it' 'son/sun' so YEAH THE 'STAR'S' NICEST 'check' the win 'rec' its like its 'WEARING CAR PRICES'
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Harvey Dent
i told you what i thought anyway i vote on at least 10-15 battles a day and leave explainations on every single one.
Most of you lack lines that make me say WOW
even the so called vets that get 9s and 10s dont have WOW lines
and one of my biggest no nos as a emcee is rappers with absolutely no vocab so check yaself eth
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thats because you're too young to get them
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My wins? I always 'planet/plan it' 'son/sun' so YEAH THE 'STAR'S' NICEST 'check' the win 'rec' its like its 'WEARING CAR PRICES'
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