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best concept so far .. 
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best concept so far ..
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1) Dude wouldn't hold heat, if he even had the SUN IN HIS HANDS
2) He ain't deep in the hood, ....PAS
3) Only time the bitch's fresh??? ....PASS
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1) Dude wouldn't hold heat, if he even had the SUN IN HIS HANDS
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1) Dude wouldn't hold heat, if he even had the SUN IN HIS HANDS
2) He ain't deep in the hood, ....PAS
3) Only time the bitch's fresh??? ....PASS
Can't think for shit now lol
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Ok, the first one has the set up. You can work like that. It has bad wording, but wording comes with delivery, which is built upon if you work harder at it later.
The other ones aren't too hard. Just think of another meaning of the words.
Hood = Ghetto (Intended meaning)
Hood = On a Jacket
Hood = On a Car
He wouldn't be in a hood if he as an engine
He wouldn't be in a hood if he was a head
Obviously two really weak concepts, but getting that mind state can let you elevate from that style. It's not my style, so I'm not trying to convert you to mine or anything, it's the basic punchline structure. Other styles come with devlopments in your game after you have this foundation set.
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1) Dude wouldn't hold heat, if he even had the SUN IN HIS HANDS
2) He ain't deep in the hood, ....PAS
3) Only time the bitch's fresh??? ....PASS
Can't think for shit now lol
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Ok, the first one has the set up. You can work like that. It has bad wording, but wording comes with delivery, which is built upon if you work harder at it later.
The other ones aren't too hard. Just think of another meaning of the words.
Hood = Ghetto (Intended meaning)
Hood = On a Jacket
Hood = On a Car
He wouldn't be in a hood if he as an engine
He wouldn't be in a hood if he was a head
Obviously two really weak concepts, but getting that mind state can let you elevate from that style. It's not my style, so I'm not trying to convert you to mine or anything, it's the basic punchline structure. Other styles come with devlopments in your game after you have this foundation set.
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1) Ya think ya "Hot" and da CATS WIT DA PUNS? but these "Fire Arms" ain't shootin da GATS OR DA GUNS! & Dude wouldn't hold heat if he was playin' CATCH W/ DA SUN
2) This "Tool" ain't got BARS or MATIC's you couldn't SPAR at AVERAGE & He ain't deep in the hood as a CAR MECHANIC
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1) Ya think ya "Hot" and da CATS WIT DA PUNS? but these "Fire Arms" ain't shootin da GATS OR DA GUNS! & Dude wouldn't hold heat if he was playin' CATCH W/ DA SUN
2) This "Tool" ain't got BARS or MATIC's you couldn't SPAR at AVERAGE & He ain't deep in the hood as a CAR MECHANIC
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stick a gerbil in my ass through a tube-eminem
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Lol @ Ej Showing Off His Skills. Naah, Raw Nevertheless Haha.
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no actually lookin for feedback
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P, We Gottttttaaaaaa Batttle Bruva.
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