Ayo One Down To Callab?

Originally Posted by Mayneak

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Dope shit famo! I like how you kept it real consistently for the lines. The nothingness metaphor you used for the first 15 lines was a sick concept too. Easily a dime

Originally Posted by Mayneak

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Dope shit famo! I like how you kept it real consistently for the lines. The nothingness metaphor you used for the first 15 lines was a sick concept too. Easily a dime

[Mayneak]

Originally Posted by FAME

yeah i thought at first tha vocab was a bit iffy..... you pulled it off well though

and the concept of line 3 was totally dope haha

sorry MV.... totally fuckin up yah thread here haha

appreciate that man...the concepts are a bit "out there" but the worked out well...

Originally Posted by MASTR

Dope shit famo! I like how you kept it real consistently for the lines. The nothingness metaphor you used for the first 15 lines was a sick concept too. Easily a dime

thats whats up...I'll hit up your inbox when ever i have fresh material...I think the next cypher i do will be a diss cypher...

[Mayneak]

Originally Posted by FAME

yeah i thought at first tha vocab was a bit iffy..... you pulled it off well though

and the concept of line 3 was totally dope haha

sorry MV.... totally fuckin up yah thread here haha

appreciate that man...the concepts are a bit "out there" but the worked out well...

Originally Posted by MASTR

Dope shit famo! I like how you kept it real consistently for the lines. The nothingness metaphor you used for the first 15 lines was a sick concept too. Easily a dime

thats whats up...I'll hit up your inbox when ever i have fresh material...I think the next cypher i do will be a diss cypher...

Originally Posted by Mayneak

thats whats up...I'll hit up your inbox when ever i have fresh material...I think the next cypher i do will be a diss cypher...

Why you gotta be like that? I'm on your side man...just look at my crew name.

Originally Posted by Mayneak

thats whats up...I'll hit up your inbox when ever i have fresh material...I think the next cypher i do will be a diss cypher...

Why you gotta be like that? I'm on your side man...just look at my crew name.

While all of these jokers are here ruining the thread (you guys ought to be ashamed!), I'll collab with you on a cypher. Give me the topic.

While all of these jokers are here ruining the thread (you guys ought to be ashamed!), I'll collab with you on a cypher. Give me the topic.

[JWall]

Originally Posted by Mayneak

appreciate that man...the concepts are a bit "out there" but the worked out well...



thats whats up...I'll hit up your inbox when ever i have fresh material...I think the next cypher i do will be a diss cypher...

I am gonna have to disagree and just say it....you fell off on the last line....gotta work on your consistency man!

Don't do a diss cypher!! Do 17-32....I just hope you can keep the dopeness up.......here is a bar to start up with:

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I don't know if that concept is the best....maybe try:

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IDK just do you, it worked the first time!!!

[JWall]

Originally Posted by Mayneak

appreciate that man...the concepts are a bit "out there" but the worked out well...



thats whats up...I'll hit up your inbox when ever i have fresh material...I think the next cypher i do will be a diss cypher...

I am gonna have to disagree and just say it....you fell off on the last line....gotta work on your consistency man!

Don't do a diss cypher!! Do 17-32....I just hope you can keep the dopeness up.......here is a bar to start up with:

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I don't know if that concept is the best....maybe try:

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IDK just do you, it worked the first time!!!