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Stephen's First Track!
 ... Yeh, I Don't Seem That Good ... But I Know I'll Get There ... Just Some Honest Feedback With A Rate Thanks, Would Be Appreciated ...
[media]http://www.letsbeef.com/forums/proddetail.php?prod=860034-Me-228[/media]
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[media]http://www.letsbeef.com/forums/proddetail.php?prod=860034-Me-228[/media]
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1 Play. Lol. Am I Really That Bad?
HAhahahahahaha ... Bump This.
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haha, aiight Stephen..
first off, it seemed like you were talking/asking questions rather than rapping..
One thing you should work on is your flow and delivery.. Deliver it with more feeling.. not saying you necessarily have to be loud and have crazy intensity b/c everyone has their own style... just make it seem like you care about what you're saying..
If you put out another track I'll peep it and see if you've improved.. there's your feed.
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haha, aiight Stephen..
first off, it seemed like you were talking/asking questions rather than rapping..
One thing you should work on is your flow and delivery.. Deliver it with more feeling.. not saying you necessarily have to be loud and have crazy intensity b/c everyone has their own style... just make it seem like you care about what you're saying..
If you put out another track I'll peep it and see if you've improved.. there's your feed.
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LOL.. co sign with remarK..
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Hey. I just wanted to apologise for acting like a dick. I was just messing with you. Wasn't being serious with that shit. No hard feelings on my part. *Your dope with it and i Give u props cuz I will never be that good..sometimes i forget to pull the tampax out though.. Be ez
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LOL.. co sign with remarK..
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Hey. I just wanted to apologise for acting like a dick. I was just messing with you. Wasn't being serious with that shit. No hard feelings on my part. *Your dope with it and i Give u props cuz I will never be that good..sometimes i forget to pull the tampax out though.. Be ez
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Thanks remarK ... I Kinda' Did That On Purpose, I Didn't Really Want It To Be Straight Out Rap ... I Just Tried Rapping A Different Way ... But Sure, Thanks, Thats What I Like To Hear Man ... Thanks Haz.
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np man, just feel for a comfortbale flow, and delivery is important. your punches, and multis are good. could be better but, work on delivery and your flow. dont sound to rushed no what im saying? but u will get it man. peace.
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np man, just feel for a comfortbale flow, and delivery is important. your punches, and multis are good. could be better but, work on delivery and your flow. dont sound to rushed no what im saying? but u will get it man. peace.
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... Thanks Fam. Lets Get Inspirational Criticism Like Students ...  ... I Mean Haz's And remarK's
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