Trying Out For Crews - Lets Beef

**B U R D E N** · #24 03-03-2010, 08:57 PM

Okay Not Bad But Your Last Line Was Weak. Some Friendly Advice Is To Always Make Sure To Rhyme With AnyThing You CAPS LOCK I Mean It Dont Make Since To Go
Im SICK-AS-FUCK You'll Be Hit By GRIP-WITH-SUCH Force I'll Split Your (WIG).
^Okay Here SICK-AS-FUCK And GRIP-WITH-SUCH Works But (WIG) Doesnt. Just Cause A One-Worded Word Rhymes With What Your Saying Doesnt Mean It Fits. Never Rhyme One-Wored Words. Like: HAT With BAT Or BAT With BAG ...Say Shit Like ....... Ima Hit This Soft Nigga With Muh BaseBall BAT-TO-THE-BACK Of This FAGS-BASEBALL-CAP/Head ! Okay, You Feel Me.

AnyWay I'll Send You In Invite

**B U R D E N** · 03-03-2010, 08:57 PM

Okay Not Bad But Your Last Line Was Weak. Some Friendly Advice Is To Always Make Sure To Rhyme With AnyThing You CAPS LOCK I Mean It Dont Make Since To Go
Im SICK-AS-FUCK You'll Be Hit By GRIP-WITH-SUCH Force I'll Split Your (WIG).
^Okay Here SICK-AS-FUCK And GRIP-WITH-SUCH Works But (WIG) Doesnt. Just Cause A One-Worded Word Rhymes With What Your Saying Doesnt Mean It Fits. Never Rhyme One-Wored Words. Like: HAT With BAT Or BAT With BAG ...Say Shit Like ....... Ima Hit This Soft Nigga With Muh BaseBall BAT-TO-THE-BACK Of This FAGS-BASEBALL-CAP/Head ! Okay, You Feel Me.

AnyWay I'll Send You In Invite


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