things ive noticed..

[mckiller187]

Originally Posted by Champion EtH

Well there's different concepts of what does and doesnt flow. The problem with the line you shared is therws so much non rhyming time. You could easily match something like that with some internal rhyming.

exactly , which goes back to too many words between rhymes... rhymes placements are where you get the rhythm and flow.. guys like phroxen were able to place them at the proper intervals to get it to roll off the tongue, and still be able to drop punchlines and wordplay.. while getting their point across legibly.... on the other end of the spectrum. there are guys who are totally opposit.. they have nice flow,nice rhyme placement but the battle verse becomes more of a cypher,and they drop basic disses,... a dope battle verse has the best of both worlds.. which is why the old heads like illimit, UA, jason, meta4,etc. all are respected, u read their shit, they were able to do that, closer multi placement, and dope punches..

[mckiller187]

Originally Posted by Champion EtH

Well there's different concepts of what does and doesnt flow. The problem with the line you shared is therws so much non rhyming time. You could easily match something like that with some internal rhyming.

exactly , which goes back to too many words between rhymes... rhymes placements are where you get the rhythm and flow.. guys like phroxen were able to place them at the proper intervals to get it to roll off the tongue, and still be able to drop punchlines and wordplay.. while getting their point across legibly.... on the other end of the spectrum. there are guys who are totally opposit.. they have nice flow,nice rhyme placement but the battle verse becomes more of a cypher,and they drop basic disses,... a dope battle verse has the best of both worlds.. which is why the old heads like illimit, UA, jason, meta4,etc. all are respected, u read their shit, they were able to do that, closer multi placement, and dope punches..