Race to 2000 Posts

[EtH]

Originally Posted by Easton

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=406645

PROBLEM CLOCKA, I'm the PROBLEM DOCTA// Dog you wouldn't go hard if you were alive after I SHOT YA// Ya pitch is 'pure wack', off centered and OLD FASHIONED// The kid is 'keystylin' and Ima still give your head a BASHING// If you wanna fuck with the kid then STEP UP// Off the top flowin crazy ya no I'M NUTS// You's better 'step the fuck back' before the kid turns 'subway' and gives you a CLEAN CUT// And I aint talkin about no ARMY SHIT// Dog your just a BARBIE BITCH// Your flow's off and your bars deliver that kinda SNOBBY PITCH..Yah ya no the team, SaVage Scriptz all day, Bnas, LETS GET IT

PROBLEM CLOCKA, I'm the PROBLEM DOCTA// Dog you wouldn't go hard if you were alive after I SHOT YA//

Analytics:

- 3 syllable scheme (basic)
- Repetitive usage of the word "PROBLEM"
- Poor conceptually - to say someone wouldn't go hard if they survived you shooting them seems backwards

Bar Grade: C-

Ya pitch is 'pure wack', off centered and OLD FASHIONED// The kid is 'keystylin' and Ima still give your head a BASHING//

Analytics:

- 3 syllable scheme + broken/choppy execution
- Schemes have poor wording (faSHION and baSHING end differently in sound and rhythmic value)
- No punch or concept of a punch present
- Bar is criminally short, and not developed at all

Bar Grade: D

If you wanna fuck with the kid then STEP UP// Off the top flowin crazy ya no I'M NUTS// You's better 'step the fuck back' before the kid turns 'subway' and gives you a CLEAN CUT//

Analytics:

- 3 syllable scheme (basic)
- extremely played concept by relating "crazy" and "nuts"
- Broken scheme (STEP up, IM nuts, CLEAN cut have different sounds and rhythmic value)
- Concept is pretty decent considering the time this was posted (subway/clean cut)

Bar Rating: C

The last bar I didn't feel like doing, but yeah...breaking Bnas shit down could run us up to 2K easy.

I read this and thought more so that Easton has no idea what he's talking about than Bnas. Dude's reading rhymes line CLEAN CUT / STEP UP and saying "3 syllable scheme is basic". Wtf?

[EtH]

Originally Posted by Easton

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=406645

PROBLEM CLOCKA, I'm the PROBLEM DOCTA// Dog you wouldn't go hard if you were alive after I SHOT YA// Ya pitch is 'pure wack', off centered and OLD FASHIONED// The kid is 'keystylin' and Ima still give your head a BASHING// If you wanna fuck with the kid then STEP UP// Off the top flowin crazy ya no I'M NUTS// You's better 'step the fuck back' before the kid turns 'subway' and gives you a CLEAN CUT// And I aint talkin about no ARMY SHIT// Dog your just a BARBIE BITCH// Your flow's off and your bars deliver that kinda SNOBBY PITCH..Yah ya no the team, SaVage Scriptz all day, Bnas, LETS GET IT

PROBLEM CLOCKA, I'm the PROBLEM DOCTA// Dog you wouldn't go hard if you were alive after I SHOT YA//

Analytics:

- 3 syllable scheme (basic)
- Repetitive usage of the word "PROBLEM"
- Poor conceptually - to say someone wouldn't go hard if they survived you shooting them seems backwards

Bar Grade: C-

Ya pitch is 'pure wack', off centered and OLD FASHIONED// The kid is 'keystylin' and Ima still give your head a BASHING//

Analytics:

- 3 syllable scheme + broken/choppy execution
- Schemes have poor wording (faSHION and baSHING end differently in sound and rhythmic value)
- No punch or concept of a punch present
- Bar is criminally short, and not developed at all

Bar Grade: D

If you wanna fuck with the kid then STEP UP// Off the top flowin crazy ya no I'M NUTS// You's better 'step the fuck back' before the kid turns 'subway' and gives you a CLEAN CUT//

Analytics:

- 3 syllable scheme (basic)
- extremely played concept by relating "crazy" and "nuts"
- Broken scheme (STEP up, IM nuts, CLEAN cut have different sounds and rhythmic value)
- Concept is pretty decent considering the time this was posted (subway/clean cut)

Bar Rating: C

The last bar I didn't feel like doing, but yeah...breaking Bnas shit down could run us up to 2K easy.

I read this and thought more so that Easton has no idea what he's talking about than Bnas. Dude's reading rhymes line CLEAN CUT / STEP UP and saying "3 syllable scheme is basic". Wtf?

[Charan]

Originally Posted by EtH

I read this and thought more so that Easton has no idea what he's talking about than Bnas. Dude's reading rhymes line CLEAN CUT / STEP UP and saying "3 syllable scheme is basic". Wtf?

Lmao I was waiting on someone to catch it

[Charan]

Originally Posted by EtH

I read this and thought more so that Easton has no idea what he's talking about than Bnas. Dude's reading rhymes line CLEAN CUT / STEP UP and saying "3 syllable scheme is basic". Wtf?

Lmao I was waiting on someone to catch it

[EtH]

Originally Posted by Easton

Lmao I was waiting on someone to catch it

Fashion and Bashing is also fine as a rhyme.

[EtH]

Originally Posted by Easton

Lmao I was waiting on someone to catch it

Fashion and Bashing is also fine as a rhyme.

[Charan]

Originally Posted by EtH

Fashion and Bashing is also fine as a rhyme.

Whoa there killa. No it ain't. Myself, and others have recently been scolded and often our whole verses dubbed "total throwaways" because one or two sounds in a syllable of ONE fucking multi was off...not naming names *cough* but we established from that point forward we're keeping that same energy lol

[Charan]

Originally Posted by EtH

Fashion and Bashing is also fine as a rhyme.

Whoa there killa. No it ain't. Myself, and others have recently been scolded and often our whole verses dubbed "total throwaways" because one or two sounds in a syllable of ONE fucking multi was off...not naming names *cough* but we established from that point forward we're keeping that same energy lol