WHAT I HAD FOR ILL5

[REZN]

Originally Posted by MadVerbs

You're an idiot who likes to assume shit.

If the event wasn't cancelled I would have finished it, within the line limit and you along w the others would have not wrote something better. Call it ego if you want, I don't give a fuck. I doubt any of you would have taken it serious enough to stand a chance.

Did I write that basic enough for you to understand?

Why you so angry, my guy?

Did your post say, or did it not, that the piece was still unfinished?

[REZN]

Originally Posted by MadVerbs

You're an idiot who likes to assume shit.

If the event wasn't cancelled I would have finished it, within the line limit and you along w the others would have not wrote something better. Call it ego if you want, I don't give a fuck. I doubt any of you would have taken it serious enough to stand a chance.

Did I write that basic enough for you to understand?

Why you so angry, my guy?

Did your post say, or did it not, that the piece was still unfinished?

[EtH]

You would have lost to any decent votes based on what you submitted alone. You can say it's not about the format and it's about the content, but you tell me anyone who's ever had success submitting a book for publishing where he didn't press enter once. It's disrespectful to the reader to make it so horribly laid out. I legitimately wouldn't make it through 3 lines without tuning out. I'd have been surprised if you got a vote, or if you were allowed to even submit that given the line limits. This shit isn't a text battle where you game the system into allowing you to have more lines.

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Furthermore if you actually managed to write that much and have an in any way decent piece you'd be the greatest writer of all time. I'll go out on a limb and say 50% of that verse is extra and unneeded.

[EtH]

You would have lost to any decent votes based on what you submitted alone. You can say it's not about the format and it's about the content, but you tell me anyone who's ever had success submitting a book for publishing where he didn't press enter once. It's disrespectful to the reader to make it so horribly laid out. I legitimately wouldn't make it through 3 lines without tuning out. I'd have been surprised if you got a vote, or if you were allowed to even submit that given the line limits. This shit isn't a text battle where you game the system into allowing you to have more lines.

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Furthermore if you actually managed to write that much and have an in any way decent piece you'd be the greatest writer of all time. I'll go out on a limb and say 50% of that verse is extra and unneeded.

[B U R D E N]

Originally Posted by REZN

Why you so angry, my guy?

Did your post say, or did it not, that the piece was still unfinished?

Holy fuck, your stupidity amazes me.

Yes, it is unfinished. Yes, it is longer than what the limit would have been.

ONLY reason it's unfinished is because the event was cancelled. ONLY reason there's extra content is because I was no longer limited to what I could write.

[B U R D E N]

Originally Posted by REZN

Why you so angry, my guy?

Did your post say, or did it not, that the piece was still unfinished?

Holy fuck, your stupidity amazes me.

Yes, it is unfinished. Yes, it is longer than what the limit would have been.

ONLY reason it's unfinished is because the event was cancelled. ONLY reason there's extra content is because I was no longer limited to what I could write.

[Brayne Ded]

I went a way, way different direction with what I had started writing. Interesting to see how you interpreted the image, though. Good shit.

[Brayne Ded]

I went a way, way different direction with what I had started writing. Interesting to see how you interpreted the image, though. Good shit.

[B U R D E N]

Originally Posted by EtH

You would have lost to any decent votes based on what you submitted alone. You can say it's not about the format and it's about the content, but you tell me anyone who's ever had success submitting a book for publishing where he didn't press enter once. It's disrespectful to the reader to make it so horribly laid out. I legitimately wouldn't make it through 3 lines without tuning out. I'd have been surprised if you got a vote, or if you were allowed to even submit that given the line limits. This shit isn't a text battle where you game the system into allowing you to have more lines.

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Furthermore if you actually managed to write that much and have an in any way decent piece you'd be the greatest writer of all time. I'll go out on a limb and say 50% of that verse is extra and unneeded.

EtH, you're smarter than this. Now go draw a picture or something.

There's extra content because half way through it, the event was cancelled. So I'm able to write as much as I wanted to at that point. Why do I have to say the same shit so many times?

I'm done goin back amd forth w you ignorant mufuckas.

[B U R D E N]

Originally Posted by EtH

You would have lost to any decent votes based on what you submitted alone. You can say it's not about the format and it's about the content, but you tell me anyone who's ever had success submitting a book for publishing where he didn't press enter once. It's disrespectful to the reader to make it so horribly laid out. I legitimately wouldn't make it through 3 lines without tuning out. I'd have been surprised if you got a vote, or if you were allowed to even submit that given the line limits. This shit isn't a text battle where you game the system into allowing you to have more lines.

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Furthermore if you actually managed to write that much and have an in any way decent piece you'd be the greatest writer of all time. I'll go out on a limb and say 50% of that verse is extra and unneeded.

EtH, you're smarter than this. Now go draw a picture or something.

There's extra content because half way through it, the event was cancelled. So I'm able to write as much as I wanted to at that point. Why do I have to say the same shit so many times?

I'm done goin back amd forth w you ignorant mufuckas.

[EtH]

If you can write a good book in 300 pages, don't write 600.

[EtH]

If you can write a good book in 300 pages, don't write 600.

[REZN]

Originally Posted by MadVerbs

Holy fuck, your stupidity amazes me.

Yes, it is unfinished. Yes, it is longer than what the limit would have been.

ONLY reason it's unfinished is because the event was cancelled. ONLY reason there's extra content is because I was no longer limited to what I could write.

So, you were going to post an unfinished piece for the battle?

[REZN]

Originally Posted by MadVerbs

Holy fuck, your stupidity amazes me.

Yes, it is unfinished. Yes, it is longer than what the limit would have been.

ONLY reason it's unfinished is because the event was cancelled. ONLY reason there's extra content is because I was no longer limited to what I could write.

So, you were going to post an unfinished piece for the battle?

[B U R D E N]

Originally Posted by REZN

So, you were going to post an unfinished piece for the battle?

Yup, exactly. Now you're catching on.

Have a good day, bitch boi.

[B U R D E N]

Originally Posted by REZN

So, you were going to post an unfinished piece for the battle?

Yup, exactly. Now you're catching on.

Have a good day, bitch boi.

[B U R D E N]

Originally Posted by Brayne Ded

I went a way, way different direction with what I had started writing. Interesting to see how you interpreted the image, though. Good shit.

I appreciate it.

It's a shame the way shit went down, would have liked to see the other drops.

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Originally Posted by Kiwi Peewee

I just realised I forgot to give any actual feedback on the verse itself lol. EtH has a point about how it’s a wall-of-text, but nonetheless it was a really enjoyable read that left me very curious to see where it’s going next. It feels like a TV episode how it finished just as your curiosity and investment in what happened next reached its peak lmao. Nice rhyming, interesting story, obviously since it hasn’t reached its conclusion the twists and turns and meta stuff hasn’t happened yet but thus far it’s definitely dope, please finish it and don’t leave us hanging

I got you, I'll finish it up eventually.

Thanks for taking the time to check it out.

[B U R D E N]

Originally Posted by Brayne Ded

I went a way, way different direction with what I had started writing. Interesting to see how you interpreted the image, though. Good shit.

I appreciate it.

It's a shame the way shit went down, would have liked to see the other drops.

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Originally Posted by Kiwi Peewee

I just realised I forgot to give any actual feedback on the verse itself lol. EtH has a point about how it’s a wall-of-text, but nonetheless it was a really enjoyable read that left me very curious to see where it’s going next. It feels like a TV episode how it finished just as your curiosity and investment in what happened next reached its peak lmao. Nice rhyming, interesting story, obviously since it hasn’t reached its conclusion the twists and turns and meta stuff hasn’t happened yet but thus far it’s definitely dope, please finish it and don’t leave us hanging

I got you, I'll finish it up eventually.

Thanks for taking the time to check it out.

[B U R D E N]

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