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[Óðinn]

Originally Posted by IIAM

Who’s got the WEAKER AWFUL BANTER,
That GEEKER PROPPER GRAMMAR , Or Croz’s BLEAKER GROVELED STAMMER? Your box is filled with lies you MEAGER PAUPER SHAMMER. Ya rhyme PATTERNs STRAIGHT RIGID, SLACKERS-get-SLAYED-in-this-KITCHEN-DAGGER-FILLETED-into-SMIDGENS-dusted-and-BATTERED-STRAY-CHICKENS! And every time you lob an open, ii’ll be there to SHATTER CLAY PIGEONS! Are you really this awful? Or were you hired to get your FACE SHOT with HAMMERS bigger than GALLAGHER STAGE PROPS! This Rap shit ain’t for you, ii’m not hating but even your names self deprecating!

The wording you chose was poor and makes the read awkward. The irony of asking whom has the proper grammar when yours (here) is atrocious. “That GEEKER PROPPER GRAMMAR”... these come across as rhyming/force rhyming for the sake of it. “Your box is filled w/ lies you MEAGER PAUPER SHAMMER”..? Seriously, man... that’s horrid.

Advice: focus on your punchline and write backwards from it, don’t force multis just for the sake of having them rhyme. You want your bars to flow, be coherent and sound natural.

[Óðinn]

Originally Posted by IIAM

Who’s got the WEAKER AWFUL BANTER,
That GEEKER PROPPER GRAMMAR , Or Croz’s BLEAKER GROVELED STAMMER? Your box is filled with lies you MEAGER PAUPER SHAMMER. Ya rhyme PATTERNs STRAIGHT RIGID, SLACKERS-get-SLAYED-in-this-KITCHEN-DAGGER-FILLETED-into-SMIDGENS-dusted-and-BATTERED-STRAY-CHICKENS! And every time you lob an open, ii’ll be there to SHATTER CLAY PIGEONS! Are you really this awful? Or were you hired to get your FACE SHOT with HAMMERS bigger than GALLAGHER STAGE PROPS! This Rap shit ain’t for you, ii’m not hating but even your names self deprecating!

The wording you chose was poor and makes the read awkward. The irony of asking whom has the proper grammar when yours (here) is atrocious. “That GEEKER PROPPER GRAMMAR”... these come across as rhyming/force rhyming for the sake of it. “Your box is filled w/ lies you MEAGER PAUPER SHAMMER”..? Seriously, man... that’s horrid.

Advice: focus on your punchline and write backwards from it, don’t force multis just for the sake of having them rhyme. You want your bars to flow, be coherent and sound natural.

[IIAM]

Originally Posted by 2FUEL

The wording you chose was poor and makes the read awkward. The irony of asking whom has the proper grammar when yours (here) is atrocious. “That GEEKER PROPPER GRAMMAR”... these come across as rhyming/force rhyming for the sake of it. “Your box is filled w/ lies you MEAGER PAUPER SHAMMER”..? Seriously, man... that’s horrid.

Advice: focus on your punchline and write backwards from it, don’t force multis just for the sake of having them rhyme. You want your bars to flow, be coherent and sound natural.

That’s his name Proper Grammar.

Who’s got the WEAKER AWFUL BANTER,
That GEEKER PROPPER GRAMMAR ,
Or Croz’s BLEAKER GROVELED STAMMER?
Your box is filled with lies you MEAGER PAUPER SHAMMER.

that line alone shits on his entire verse.

ii know it’s hard for you to say cause your accent is atrocious,
But it isn’t forced at all, plus ii don’t expect you to ever side with me on anything.
I could say 2Few used to be a MOD and you’ll try to prove me wrong.
Plus that drop was enough to 100%-0 that kid.

---------- Post added at 09:09 PM ---------- Previous post was at 09:05 PM ----------

It’s like ii’m saying
Who’s more of a faggot?
Guts or 2Few?

Proper Grammar is one person,
Croz is another.

[IIAM]

Originally Posted by 2FUEL

The wording you chose was poor and makes the read awkward. The irony of asking whom has the proper grammar when yours (here) is atrocious. “That GEEKER PROPPER GRAMMAR”... these come across as rhyming/force rhyming for the sake of it. “Your box is filled w/ lies you MEAGER PAUPER SHAMMER”..? Seriously, man... that’s horrid.

Advice: focus on your punchline and write backwards from it, don’t force multis just for the sake of having them rhyme. You want your bars to flow, be coherent and sound natural.

That’s his name Proper Grammar.

Who’s got the WEAKER AWFUL BANTER,
That GEEKER PROPPER GRAMMAR ,
Or Croz’s BLEAKER GROVELED STAMMER?
Your box is filled with lies you MEAGER PAUPER SHAMMER.

that line alone shits on his entire verse.

ii know it’s hard for you to say cause your accent is atrocious,
But it isn’t forced at all, plus ii don’t expect you to ever side with me on anything.
I could say 2Few used to be a MOD and you’ll try to prove me wrong.
Plus that drop was enough to 100%-0 that kid.

---------- Post added at 09:09 PM ---------- Previous post was at 09:05 PM ----------

It’s like ii’m saying
Who’s more of a faggot?
Guts or 2Few?

Proper Grammar is one person,
Croz is another.

[Óðinn]

Originally Posted by IIAM

That’s his name Proper Grammar.

Who’s got the WEAKER AWFUL BANTER,
That GEEKER PROPPER GRAMMAR ,
Or Croz’s BLEAKER GROVELED STAMMER?
Your box is filled with lies you MEAGER PAUPER SHAMMER.

that line alone shits on his entire verse.

ii know it’s hard for you to say cause your accent is atrocious,
But it isn’t forced at all, plus ii don’t expect you to ever side with me on anything.
I could say 2Few used to be a MOD and you’ll try to prove me wrong.
Plus that drop was enough to 100%-0 that kid.

Lol... you obviously have no clue of what my accent is then. I can tell you now, everyone will agree with me on this, man. You don’t see it, fine. with all your attempts and nonsense towards me, I actually have nothing against you, at all. Just being honest with you and trying to make you see but you ‘Can lead a horse to water but can’t make it drink’..

Your wording and multis were forced to fuck like victims of rape... simple as.

[Óðinn]

Originally Posted by IIAM

That’s his name Proper Grammar.

Who’s got the WEAKER AWFUL BANTER,
That GEEKER PROPPER GRAMMAR ,
Or Croz’s BLEAKER GROVELED STAMMER?
Your box is filled with lies you MEAGER PAUPER SHAMMER.

that line alone shits on his entire verse.

ii know it’s hard for you to say cause your accent is atrocious,
But it isn’t forced at all, plus ii don’t expect you to ever side with me on anything.
I could say 2Few used to be a MOD and you’ll try to prove me wrong.
Plus that drop was enough to 100%-0 that kid.

Lol... you obviously have no clue of what my accent is then. I can tell you now, everyone will agree with me on this, man. You don’t see it, fine. with all your attempts and nonsense towards me, I actually have nothing against you, at all. Just being honest with you and trying to make you see but you ‘Can lead a horse to water but can’t make it drink’..

Your wording and multis were forced to fuck like victims of rape... simple as.