ATT 2018 ROUND 1: Writer 14 vs Writer 16 (Writer 14 wins 3-0)

[KG The Prince]

One used tha topic given and twisted it into their own recent unique personal experience. Tha whale's coming up to tha surface and tha writer's feeling of tragedy intertwined to produce a meaningful and subtle verse. Wasn't too complex but it was natural and this hit for me.

Tha other writer based his verse off tha picture given, which there is nothing with, but some parts sounded really weird and even though this verse was more complex, tha imagery used wasn't as good as #14's write up.

Overall, one had a better use of tha topic whilst not being too creative but still producing a good verse, whilst tha other had a more story-like verse which was complex but had more faults in tha verse.

MVGT: Writer 14

[KG The Prince]

One used tha topic given and twisted it into their own recent unique personal experience. Tha whale's coming up to tha surface and tha writer's feeling of tragedy intertwined to produce a meaningful and subtle verse. Wasn't too complex but it was natural and this hit for me.

Tha other writer based his verse off tha picture given, which there is nothing with, but some parts sounded really weird and even though this verse was more complex, tha imagery used wasn't as good as #14's write up.

Overall, one had a better use of tha topic whilst not being too creative but still producing a good verse, whilst tha other had a more story-like verse which was complex but had more faults in tha verse.

MVGT: Writer 14