After 10yrs Of Thinking I Was Dope, I Was WRONG - Lets Beef

**HIGHpothasis** · #1 11-26-2017, 04:11 PM

Alright LB, I've Been a Member since 08' and I Always Thought I Was a Beast

But I've Now Eaten Enuff Humble Pie to Be Open To Elevation Tips and Critique

So Is Anyone Available for the Task Of Helping me Improve?

I'm Open To Listen and Learn and Deplete and Implement in order to become a Better battle Rapper

Come One Come All...

-MaCc Duh God aka Sir Swatt

**HIGHpothasis** · 11-26-2017, 04:11 PM

Alright LB, I've Been a Member since 08' and I Always Thought I Was a Beast

But I've Now Eaten Enuff Humble Pie to Be Open To Elevation Tips and Critique

So Is Anyone Available for the Task Of Helping me Improve?

I'm Open To Listen and Learn and Deplete and Implement in order to become a Better battle Rapper

Come One Come All...

-MaCc Duh God aka Sir Swatt

**Bape** · #2 11-26-2017, 04:39 PM

You've got most of it down to a t imo. It's just the freshness/creativity of everything. It's usually topics I've heard before, that you rap about.

**Bape** · 11-26-2017, 04:39 PM

You've got most of it down to a t imo. It's just the freshness/creativity of everything. It's usually topics I've heard before, that you rap about.

**NOBLE** · #3 11-26-2017, 04:40 PM

Don't battle so much. Take your time to craft witty and more complex verses. Quality over quantity. Don't be too concerned with winning or attaining number 1 of the month or number 1 of all time. It mostly doesn't mean anything cause it just says you battle a lot, not that you post great battles.

**NOBLE** · 11-26-2017, 04:40 PM

Don't battle so much. Take your time to craft witty and more complex verses. Quality over quantity. Don't be too concerned with winning or attaining number 1 of the month or number 1 of all time. It mostly doesn't mean anything cause it just says you battle a lot, not that you post great battles.

#4 11-26-2017, 04:43 PM

Setup, punch. You incorporate too many multis that don't have anything to d9 with the punch. It waters down your verses with filler.

11-26-2017, 04:43 PM

Setup, punch. You incorporate too many multis that don't have anything to d9 with the punch. It waters down your verses with filler.

**RULE** · #5 11-26-2017, 04:50 PM

post the best verse you've ever written.

**RULE** · 11-26-2017, 04:50 PM

post the best verse you've ever written.

**HIGHpothasis** · #6 11-26-2017, 05:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by RULE

post the best verse you've ever written.

I Have over 2000 battles. Lol that would take forever but after I get off work I'll take a read thru and see my Favorite.

**HIGHpothasis** · 11-26-2017, 05:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by RULE

post the best verse you've ever written.

I Have over 2000 battles. Lol that would take forever but after I get off work I'll take a read thru and see my Favorite.

**Shodan** · #7 11-26-2017, 05:51 PM

For what it's worth, you're not completely wack. I've made fun of you for supposedly being trash because it amused me, but you're actually alright.

**Shodan** · 11-26-2017, 05:51 PM

For what it's worth, you're not completely wack. I've made fun of you for supposedly being trash because it amused me, but you're actually alright.

**HIGHpothasis** · #8 11-26-2017, 07:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shodan

For what it's worth, you're not completely wack. I've made fun of you for supposedly being trash because it amused me, but you're actually alright.

Well damn that's just as close to a compliment that I'd ever expect to get out of you. I appreciate it.

Im Starting to realize (all over again) that LB is about Dropping 'Entertaining' Verses so I guess I should Sacrifice Following the Universally Proper & strategic Ruling of Battle Rap and Attempt to drop Creative Bars that the Judges Can Enjoy.

Note Taken...

**HIGHpothasis** · 11-26-2017, 07:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shodan

For what it's worth, you're not completely wack. I've made fun of you for supposedly being trash because it amused me, but you're actually alright.

Well damn that's just as close to a compliment that I'd ever expect to get out of you. I appreciate it.

Im Starting to realize (all over again) that LB is about Dropping 'Entertaining' Verses so I guess I should Sacrifice Following the Universally Proper & strategic Ruling of Battle Rap and Attempt to drop Creative Bars that the Judges Can Enjoy.

Note Taken...

**Erupt da Monsta** · #9 11-26-2017, 07:56 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by NOBLE

Don't battle so much. Take your time to craft witty and more complex verses. Quality over quantity. Don't be too concerned with winning or attaining number 1 of the month or number 1 of all time. It mostly doesn't mean anything cause it just says you battle a lot, not that you post great battles.

^^This. Instead of battling everyone, battle the vets, and do tourneys.

**Erupt da Monsta** · 11-26-2017, 07:56 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by NOBLE

Don't battle so much. Take your time to craft witty and more complex verses. Quality over quantity. Don't be too concerned with winning or attaining number 1 of the month or number 1 of all time. It mostly doesn't mean anything cause it just says you battle a lot, not that you post great battles.

^^This. Instead of battling everyone, battle the vets, and do tourneys.

**HIGHpothasis** · #10 11-26-2017, 08:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Erupt

^^This. Instead of battling everyone, battle the vets, and do tourneys.

But What 'Vets' are Actually Still Texting Rupt? LB is gonna have to Grow New Vets. And Tournys are Far and In between.

I understand the statement but not how to Factually Act Upon it...

**HIGHpothasis** · 11-26-2017, 08:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Erupt

^^This. Instead of battling everyone, battle the vets, and do tourneys.

But What 'Vets' are Actually Still Texting Rupt? LB is gonna have to Grow New Vets. And Tournys are Far and In between.

I understand the statement but not how to Factually Act Upon it...


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