POST YOUR BEST VERSE, ANDD......

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=498303

Do this one I guess.

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=498303

Do this one I guess.

[Esso]

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=495590

[Esso]

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=495590

[OSKAR]

Appreciate the time rupt.. delivery is what I have to work on For sure. Respect

[OSKAR]

Appreciate the time rupt.. delivery is what I have to work on For sure. Respect

Originally Posted by Esso

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=495590

bruh

Originally Posted by Esso

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=495590

bruh

[KG The Prince]

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=500844

this guys eminem and biggie (literally)

stupid fucka lmaooo!!

[KG The Prince]

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=500844

this guys eminem and biggie (literally)

stupid fucka lmaooo!!

[Nerdism]

An dude thought nobody would notice lmao so lame

[Nerdism]

An dude thought nobody would notice lmao so lame

Its been one day aint a damn chance Rupt comes back to the thread.

Its been one day aint a damn chance Rupt comes back to the thread.

[Erupt da Monsta]

Originally Posted by Aggo

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=498303

Do this one I guess.

Aggo. Whats good pimp. Just judging off of this verse, you had some dope lines. The AL Gore closer was nice. The main thing i see here is your use of filler lines, without completely maximizing the box. When i saw your name i was going to say heavyweight, due to the bars i saw in the Tag, but seems as tho you are just a hair short as well. Try throwing more punches, losing some of the filler. Just judging off this verse. Still a very solid verse. Also your wording could use a lil work to ensure that it reads smoothly like the Al Gore punch was very close to heavyweight just the wording didnt work both ways, if that makes sense.

Overall you are a very solid MIDDLEWEIGHT, on his way to heavyweight as well. Seems like the trend here, guessing most of you guys were in the same elevation crews. Holler at me for more help on the matter, ive gotten lots of people over this hump i.e cats like Illokwent.

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Originally Posted by Esso

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=495590

Lol. you do know that was an open i posted and wrote in like 5 min right? basically saying im retiring from texting lol
You get middle weight status for that shit... bhahahaha


Nah man. Decent verse here, didnt think that was your best verse tbh. There were some haymakers thrown as well, and you do a great job with wording. Ive read a lot of your verses, and what stands out to me are your concepts. You are creative, and throw a good amount of punches. Only thing i'd say you could work on is finding your own style, and swag. Once you find that you could be more than just a regular heavyweight.

You are a Heavyweight, have been catching bodys on the regular, and had a very solid LBT run.



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Originally Posted by Jimmy Hoffa

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=500781

Here you go @Erupt

Lockhart. This verse was dope af. People are sleeping on you man. Your ability to string together punches, personals, etc is dope. You threw some relevant haymakers in here like the closer. There are lots of quotables here, and the personal edge along with the wording, coupled with the punch consistency, and the structure of the verse make you good. Only thing i'd say you need to work on is finding your own personal swag, same as esso. You both have the fundamentals down, good concepts, and you are in fact a HEAVYWEIGHT. Ive watched you climb for awhile now, and you don't get the love you deserve. Maybe you can show us all why i call you a heavyweight with this next LBT run.

Ez.

[Erupt da Monsta]

Originally Posted by Aggo

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=498303

Do this one I guess.

Aggo. Whats good pimp. Just judging off of this verse, you had some dope lines. The AL Gore closer was nice. The main thing i see here is your use of filler lines, without completely maximizing the box. When i saw your name i was going to say heavyweight, due to the bars i saw in the Tag, but seems as tho you are just a hair short as well. Try throwing more punches, losing some of the filler. Just judging off this verse. Still a very solid verse. Also your wording could use a lil work to ensure that it reads smoothly like the Al Gore punch was very close to heavyweight just the wording didnt work both ways, if that makes sense.

Overall you are a very solid MIDDLEWEIGHT, on his way to heavyweight as well. Seems like the trend here, guessing most of you guys were in the same elevation crews. Holler at me for more help on the matter, ive gotten lots of people over this hump i.e cats like Illokwent.

---------- Post added at 08:20 AM ---------- Previous post was at 08:15 AM ----------

Originally Posted by Esso

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=495590

Lol. you do know that was an open i posted and wrote in like 5 min right? basically saying im retiring from texting lol
You get middle weight status for that shit... bhahahaha


Nah man. Decent verse here, didnt think that was your best verse tbh. There were some haymakers thrown as well, and you do a great job with wording. Ive read a lot of your verses, and what stands out to me are your concepts. You are creative, and throw a good amount of punches. Only thing i'd say you could work on is finding your own style, and swag. Once you find that you could be more than just a regular heavyweight.

You are a Heavyweight, have been catching bodys on the regular, and had a very solid LBT run.



---------- Post added at 08:29 AM ---------- Previous post was at 08:20 AM ----------

Originally Posted by Jimmy Hoffa

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=500781

Here you go @Erupt

Lockhart. This verse was dope af. People are sleeping on you man. Your ability to string together punches, personals, etc is dope. You threw some relevant haymakers in here like the closer. There are lots of quotables here, and the personal edge along with the wording, coupled with the punch consistency, and the structure of the verse make you good. Only thing i'd say you need to work on is finding your own personal swag, same as esso. You both have the fundamentals down, good concepts, and you are in fact a HEAVYWEIGHT. Ive watched you climb for awhile now, and you don't get the love you deserve. Maybe you can show us all why i call you a heavyweight with this next LBT run.

Ez.

Good looks rupt. Yeah, Bleu definitely helped me to see basically what you are saying as well.

Good looks rupt. Yeah, Bleu definitely helped me to see basically what you are saying as well.

[Erupt da Monsta]

Originally Posted by Rain Matrix 2007

Its been one day aint a damn chance Rupt comes back to the thread.

Bar was trash, you're a super lightweight :grass:

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Originally Posted by Aggo

Good looks rupt. Yeah, Bleu definitely helped me to see basically what you are saying as well.

Yessir, follow that same blueprint yall had in the tag, and you're golden bruh.

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Originally Posted by OSKAR

Appreciate the time rupt.. delivery is what I have to work on For sure. Respect

Anytime bruh. You know i been a fan of your elevation for a couple years now, keep it up fam!

[Erupt da Monsta]

Originally Posted by Rain Matrix 2007

Its been one day aint a damn chance Rupt comes back to the thread.

Bar was trash, you're a super lightweight :grass:

---------- Post added at 08:32 AM ---------- Previous post was at 08:32 AM ----------

Originally Posted by Aggo

Good looks rupt. Yeah, Bleu definitely helped me to see basically what you are saying as well.

Yessir, follow that same blueprint yall had in the tag, and you're golden bruh.

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Originally Posted by OSKAR

Appreciate the time rupt.. delivery is what I have to work on For sure. Respect

Anytime bruh. You know i been a fan of your elevation for a couple years now, keep it up fam!