Rant's Critique Cloud:

[Shodan]

@Rant

I picked this one because it's the most recent verse that I've actually given a fuck about, so it'll probably be around the level of my GC shit.

"The public will see something fishy" if voters call his WEAK VERSE A MASTERPIECE, Higher Ed. will "whale on him" the TEAMS PULLING RATCHETS, B, "ready to dive in, and-all-finna-kill you" like SEA WORLD TRAGEDIES (and dolphin) / He says "It's a lifesaver" about his prowess with his PEN AND HIS PAPER but "I can breathe easy" knowing that it "NEVER IS SAVORED" you tryna "Mint something fresh?" Why ain't it "PEPPERED WITH FLAVOR?" Fybre Optikz, you're just GAY AND A MORON, saying "Give me nothing but the D!" so here's your FAILING REPORT CARD; You're a hate voter! Probly goes on GC finals and leaves RATINGS OF FOUR DROPPED we see "ya docked-a-written-judgment", no disserTATION IN COURT LAW!!! (doctorate in) / He "joins cards, but never wins," so I'm TRULY OWNING FAM, "bringing clubs to the table"? that's something he ain't DO, IT'S KNOWN AS FACT, so if he "throwin' hands, in spades" he tryna LOSE A POKER MATCH!! If his verse is "taken at face value" we would RECOGNIZE A KING but "to be straight with y'all," who's really STEPPED INSIDE THE RING? A faggoty third grader with no WEAPON PRIMED TO SQUEEZE, "see: ya eight, and a jack-off from the start"... He's hoping for a TEN, A NINE, AND QUEEN

[Shodan]

@Rant

I picked this one because it's the most recent verse that I've actually given a fuck about, so it'll probably be around the level of my GC shit.

"The public will see something fishy" if voters call his WEAK VERSE A MASTERPIECE, Higher Ed. will "whale on him" the TEAMS PULLING RATCHETS, B, "ready to dive in, and-all-finna-kill you" like SEA WORLD TRAGEDIES (and dolphin) / He says "It's a lifesaver" about his prowess with his PEN AND HIS PAPER but "I can breathe easy" knowing that it "NEVER IS SAVORED" you tryna "Mint something fresh?" Why ain't it "PEPPERED WITH FLAVOR?" Fybre Optikz, you're just GAY AND A MORON, saying "Give me nothing but the D!" so here's your FAILING REPORT CARD; You're a hate voter! Probly goes on GC finals and leaves RATINGS OF FOUR DROPPED we see "ya docked-a-written-judgment", no disserTATION IN COURT LAW!!! (doctorate in) / He "joins cards, but never wins," so I'm TRULY OWNING FAM, "bringing clubs to the table"? that's something he ain't DO, IT'S KNOWN AS FACT, so if he "throwin' hands, in spades" he tryna LOSE A POKER MATCH!! If his verse is "taken at face value" we would RECOGNIZE A KING but "to be straight with y'all," who's really STEPPED INSIDE THE RING? A faggoty third grader with no WEAPON PRIMED TO SQUEEZE, "see: ya eight, and a jack-off from the start"... He's hoping for a TEN, A NINE, AND QUEEN