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12-16-2014, 10:41 AM
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Multi game flow on point.. best punches imo.. 10-4punch afairs in order...special in store and close call....worst punches....air hell/aeriel plane=forced as hell...and plane wordplay =basic..doesnt read correctly in both puns..ice game and royals .oone was meh other was okaish self hype.... bottom line. The structure and multi usage ..clear convo style wording is well done... punches were a mixed bag.imo
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Multi game flow on point.. best punches imo.. 10-4punch afairs in order...special in store and close call....worst punches....air hell/aeriel plane=forced as hell...and plane wordplay =basic..doesnt read correctly in both puns..ice game and royals .oone was meh other was okaish self hype.... bottom line. The structure and multi usage ..clear convo style wording is well done... punches were a mixed bag.imo
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12-16-2014, 11:47 AM
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*posts perfect verse*
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*posts perfect verse*
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he found out, drove his CAR to WHERE I LIVE puts his CHOPPER to my CHIN-TIGHT Asks me if I got my “Affairs in order” …. Hmmm, well I said your DAUGHTER… THEN your BITCH, RIGHT???
lmao J still kinging it.
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he found out, drove his CAR to WHERE I LIVE puts his CHOPPER to my CHIN-TIGHT Asks me if I got my “Affairs in order” …. Hmmm, well I said your DAUGHTER… THEN your BITCH, RIGHT???
lmao J still kinging it.
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Originally Posted by Ivan CORTEZ
This verse was so dope, the flier line and the afairs In order and almost every bar was perfect. Had the basics down to a t.
The problem with most these battlers is that they try that overly complex shit without mastering their basics (usage of relevant multies and setups, wording a concept so that the punch is more impactful).
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@ Jasons verse might be having less punches than others 32 but quality over quantity. All those punches were crisp and perfect and executed properly.
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I beat this verse by @ Jason in an audio tournament. By like 80%. Lol.
Let's all talk about how it's a perfect verse again.
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Originally Posted by Ivan CORTEZ
This verse was so dope, the flier line and the afairs In order and almost every bar was perfect. Had the basics down to a t.
The problem with most these battlers is that they try that overly complex shit without mastering their basics (usage of relevant multies and setups, wording a concept so that the punch is more impactful).
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@ Jasons verse might be having less punches than others 32 but quality over quantity. All those punches were crisp and perfect and executed properly.
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I beat this verse by @ Jason in an audio tournament. By like 80%. Lol.
Let's all talk about how it's a perfect verse again.
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12-17-2014, 10:01 PM
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I beat this verse by @ Jason in an audio tournament. By like 80%. Lol.
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Lol
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I beat this verse by @ Jason in an audio tournament. By like 80%. Lol.
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Lol
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I wouldn't say that Jason's verse was perfect, but it's one of my favourite verses of all time. Other than reefer, swish & huey jazz (UA, daddio and illy too, depending on how far back you wanna go) there's nobody that can really pull off that slick shit to such a high standard. It all flows and connects; it reads as a verse, rather than a collection of punches. That's why it's so revered IMO. I'm not trying to give the 'golden era' rappers a pass, but I would personally much rather read 10 verses like this over a single forced concept with an AABBA set up.
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I wouldn't say that Jason's verse was perfect, but it's one of my favourite verses of all time. Other than reefer, swish & huey jazz (UA, daddio and illy too, depending on how far back you wanna go) there's nobody that can really pull off that slick shit to such a high standard. It all flows and connects; it reads as a verse, rather than a collection of punches. That's why it's so revered IMO. I'm not trying to give the 'golden era' rappers a pass, but I would personally much rather read 10 verses like this over a single forced concept with an AABBA set up.
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