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08-26-2014, 04:23 PM
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His palms are sweaty, knees weak, arms are heavy
There's vomit on his sweater already, mom's spaghetti
He's nervous, but on the surface he looks calm and ready to drop bombs,
But he keeps on forgetting what he wrote down,
The whole crowd goes so loud
He opens his mouth, but the words won't come out
He's choking how, everybody's joking now
The clock's run out, time's up, over, bloah!
Snap back to reality, Oh there goes gravity
Oh, there goes Rabbit, he choked
He's so mad, but he won't give up that
Easy, no
He won't have it, he knows his whole back's to these ropes
It don't matter, he's dope
He knows that but he's broke
He's so stagnant, he knows
When he goes back to his mobile home, that's when it's
Back to the lab again, yo
This whole rhapsody
He better go capture this moment and hope it don't pass him
Multi wise: Maybe
Lyrical: Nope
Overall: Nope
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08-26-2014, 04:23 PM
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His palms are sweaty, knees weak, arms are heavy
There's vomit on his sweater already, mom's spaghetti
He's nervous, but on the surface he looks calm and ready to drop bombs,
But he keeps on forgetting what he wrote down,
The whole crowd goes so loud
He opens his mouth, but the words won't come out
He's choking how, everybody's joking now
The clock's run out, time's up, over, bloah!
Snap back to reality, Oh there goes gravity
Oh, there goes Rabbit, he choked
He's so mad, but he won't give up that
Easy, no
He won't have it, he knows his whole back's to these ropes
It don't matter, he's dope
He knows that but he's broke
He's so stagnant, he knows
When he goes back to his mobile home, that's when it's
Back to the lab again, yo
This whole rhapsody
He better go capture this moment and hope it don't pass him
Multi wise: Maybe
Lyrical: Nope
Overall: Nope
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08-26-2014, 04:32 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Fredo Lombardi
His palms are sweaty, knees weak, arms are heavy
There's vomit on his sweater already, mom's spaghetti
He's nervous, but on the surface he looks calm and ready to drop bombs,
But he keeps on forgetting what he wrote down,
The whole crowd goes so loud
He opens his mouth, but the words won't come out
He's choking how, everybody's joking now
The clock's run out, time's up, over, bloah!
Snap back to reality, Oh there goes gravity
Oh, there goes Rabbit, he choked
He's so mad, but he won't give up that
Easy, no
He won't have it, he knows his whole back's to these ropes
It don't matter, he's dope
He knows that but he's broke
He's so stagnant, he knows
When he goes back to his mobile home, that's when it's
Back to the lab again, yo
This whole rhapsody
He better go capture this moment and hope it don't pass him
Multi wise: Maybe
Lyrical: Nope
Overall: Nope
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Were those really the only things you looked for in the verse?
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08-26-2014, 04:32 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Fredo Lombardi
His palms are sweaty, knees weak, arms are heavy
There's vomit on his sweater already, mom's spaghetti
He's nervous, but on the surface he looks calm and ready to drop bombs,
But he keeps on forgetting what he wrote down,
The whole crowd goes so loud
He opens his mouth, but the words won't come out
He's choking how, everybody's joking now
The clock's run out, time's up, over, bloah!
Snap back to reality, Oh there goes gravity
Oh, there goes Rabbit, he choked
He's so mad, but he won't give up that
Easy, no
He won't have it, he knows his whole back's to these ropes
It don't matter, he's dope
He knows that but he's broke
He's so stagnant, he knows
When he goes back to his mobile home, that's when it's
Back to the lab again, yo
This whole rhapsody
He better go capture this moment and hope it don't pass him
Multi wise: Maybe
Lyrical: Nope
Overall: Nope
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Were those really the only things you looked for in the verse?
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08-27-2014, 01:58 AM
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Originally Posted by Punk
Were those really the only things you looked for in the verse?
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you did see overall in there with multis and lyrical ability didn't you?
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Originally Posted by Dean
You're only judging it from a lyrical/Multi standpoint?
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lyrical ability, multi, and overall
imo Common's I Used to Love Her is the greatest hip hop song ever written
but hey thats just my opinion i'm not stating opinions as facts like you
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08-27-2014, 01:58 AM
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Were those really the only things you looked for in the verse?
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you did see overall in there with multis and lyrical ability didn't you?
---------- Post added at 10:58 PM ---------- Previous post was at 10:53 PM ----------
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Originally Posted by Dean
You're only judging it from a lyrical/Multi standpoint?
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lyrical ability, multi, and overall
imo Common's I Used to Love Her is the greatest hip hop song ever written
but hey thats just my opinion i'm not stating opinions as facts like you
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08-26-2014, 04:34 PM
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Originally Posted by Fredo Lombardi
Multi wise: Maybe
Lyrical: Nope
Overall: Nope
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You're only judging it from a lyrical/Multi standpoint?
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08-26-2014, 04:34 PM
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Originally Posted by Fredo Lombardi
Multi wise: Maybe
Lyrical: Nope
Overall: Nope
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You're only judging it from a lyrical/Multi standpoint?
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