DGW vs Marshall Law

[Doer]

It's pretty interesting battle bro. This my first time seeing a live battler on here. There are probably more but I don't really pay attention to what's going on in the site that much. But yeah I would have gave it law as well. He just kept up the relentless attack and you kinda had few slip ups. Think you had one after your first couple bars. He cocky as hell though and reeeeeal arrogant but those type of dudes you want to verse. Boost your morale exceptionally when you body them. I used to live battle and shit like that happens all the time. The league disbanded though. If it didn't, id probably still be raping on there. Also, I probably have no right to say because it's your own personal style but if I were you, Id dim down the gun bars. It's okay to have them in there but once it's repetitive, it's gets pretty boring. Majority of your 1st round was straight gun bars. Personals can really be useful in these circumstances. Your gun bars are dope don't get me wrong but don't put so much in your battles. I'd say like 2-3 gun bars each round maybe even less. But like I said, I probably don't have the right to say. Brighter sides however, your delivery is very impressive, gritty, good stage performance. Crowd was dead as fuck on a couple lines. Thought the inlaw/outlaw line was dope and plenty more but that's what happens when you a rookie. They dick ride the known battler. Keep grinding though homie you got the style to become a great battle rapper

[Doer]

It's pretty interesting battle bro. This my first time seeing a live battler on here. There are probably more but I don't really pay attention to what's going on in the site that much. But yeah I would have gave it law as well. He just kept up the relentless attack and you kinda had few slip ups. Think you had one after your first couple bars. He cocky as hell though and reeeeeal arrogant but those type of dudes you want to verse. Boost your morale exceptionally when you body them. I used to live battle and shit like that happens all the time. The league disbanded though. If it didn't, id probably still be raping on there. Also, I probably have no right to say because it's your own personal style but if I were you, Id dim down the gun bars. It's okay to have them in there but once it's repetitive, it's gets pretty boring. Majority of your 1st round was straight gun bars. Personals can really be useful in these circumstances. Your gun bars are dope don't get me wrong but don't put so much in your battles. I'd say like 2-3 gun bars each round maybe even less. But like I said, I probably don't have the right to say. Brighter sides however, your delivery is very impressive, gritty, good stage performance. Crowd was dead as fuck on a couple lines. Thought the inlaw/outlaw line was dope and plenty more but that's what happens when you a rookie. They dick ride the known battler. Keep grinding though homie you got the style to become a great battle rapper