2013 GC RD.3 - Sean Cron Vs. Dono (Dono Wins 3-0)

[ELOH STACKz]

Sean Cron: nice drop my G. I think you Multi usage was real strong all throughout the verse. But I didn't really see a clear cut connection to your Topic. Your premise was decent, the whole assassination thing. But you left a lot of questions: was it murder for hire? Was this his first target? Who was Vindicated? If he felt bad about Killing the priest, why did he stab him?... I guess that was supposed to be the hypocritical part, right? It's like, I see the puzzle pieces, but I can't piece it together.

Dono: I like the whole court room scenario. I actually did the same thing in my Topical. Unfortunately my opponent no showed & it went to waste. You rhyme scheme wasn't as complex as your opponent, but your imagery was better. I felt like I was in that Court-room & saw the Judge getting cuffed. Nice little plot twist at the end too, I like the misdirection with the Guilty Drug Dealer. I think you did a better job incorporating the "Hypocritical Vindication" topic too. You used the corrupt Judge as your Hypocritical component. He's supposed to uphold the law & gets caught taking illegal bribes. How can he prosecute criminals when he is one himself? Good cops & victims of the wrongfully sentenced feel Vindication. So I'm gonna have to give you some extra points for that.

Vote: Dono

[ELOH STACKz]

Sean Cron: nice drop my G. I think you Multi usage was real strong all throughout the verse. But I didn't really see a clear cut connection to your Topic. Your premise was decent, the whole assassination thing. But you left a lot of questions: was it murder for hire? Was this his first target? Who was Vindicated? If he felt bad about Killing the priest, why did he stab him?... I guess that was supposed to be the hypocritical part, right? It's like, I see the puzzle pieces, but I can't piece it together.

Dono: I like the whole court room scenario. I actually did the same thing in my Topical. Unfortunately my opponent no showed & it went to waste. You rhyme scheme wasn't as complex as your opponent, but your imagery was better. I felt like I was in that Court-room & saw the Judge getting cuffed. Nice little plot twist at the end too, I like the misdirection with the Guilty Drug Dealer. I think you did a better job incorporating the "Hypocritical Vindication" topic too. You used the corrupt Judge as your Hypocritical component. He's supposed to uphold the law & gets caught taking illegal bribes. How can he prosecute criminals when he is one himself? Good cops & victims of the wrongfully sentenced feel Vindication. So I'm gonna have to give you some extra points for that.

Vote: Dono