Help (Round 2)

[Step S]

So, After Reading Eth's, Core Souls And Manny's Comments (Appreciated), This Is What I Came Up W/. I Followed Eth's Idea Of Just Focusing On The Ending Punch (In Other Words). So, I Came Up W/ A Simple 1 Minute Thought Of Concept. I Tried To Keep It, How Should I Put It ........ "Not Talking Bout Myself", And Focusing More About The Opponent's Verse.

Anyway, I CAN DO BETTER.

everytime he think he feelin high, thinkin he in the sky is actually when he TRIPPIN ON SHOE-LACES!!!/

Holla.

[Step S]

So, After Reading Eth's, Core Souls And Manny's Comments (Appreciated), This Is What I Came Up W/. I Followed Eth's Idea Of Just Focusing On The Ending Punch (In Other Words). So, I Came Up W/ A Simple 1 Minute Thought Of Concept. I Tried To Keep It, How Should I Put It ........ "Not Talking Bout Myself", And Focusing More About The Opponent's Verse.

Anyway, I CAN DO BETTER.

everytime he think he feelin high, thinkin he in the sky is actually when he TRIPPIN ON SHOE-LACES!!!/

Holla.