Huey's Play House: Track Feed Back

Originally Posted by ŢŔĘ=ĎŐРΣ

http://www.letsbeef.com/forums/prodd...d=50414-Im-119

I remixed it if you heard the previous track, sounds much better than it did before. it was horrible LOL anyways.. feel free to throw this some honest feedback.

@Gurp Da God

BEAT man i heard hopsin spit on this mad time ago and i never liked this beat. and i don't like hopsin... dudes always sayin how real he is but all i see is a giant gimmick. but anyway, i don't like the beat, its like psuedo-eminem but goofier. especially those changes and the quick violin run to transition.. its just an obvious shady production clone

PERFORMANCE you were goin in fersure. it suited the song well, crazy guy

PRODUCTION Your vocals are made to look shitty by hopsins voice on the hook. i could hear the shit you say though, so i can't complain too much, and the track wasn't popping even though you were pretty viscous. tbh its just your microphone, the quality was as good as its going to be at least to my knowledge

LYRIC didn't like it again. some images were worth a chuckle, like groupies doming u while u do a handstand... but that seems like a lot of effort on your part i dont know why youd wanna do that. it was eminem reminiscent in the style of 'look how crazy i am, these are hypothetical situations i've thought up' but yours were kinda just too weird to be humorous or entertaining for the most part. why would you piss on my face? floss with a giant's pubic hair? whores diaries n shit. you never wanna go FULL crazy person.. kinda like the full retard thing. you really do sound like some outback white dude that wants to eat babies. or actually no u don't sound intense enough to actually eat the babies, but u sound like you think about it. it was like a tasteless/less clever rendition of a style that eminem already completely shit all over. then the rest of the song was you calling an imaginary person a faggot... i didn't enjoy it

HOOK the hook was just hopsin's hook.. which i already thought was lame

OVERALL i can't fuck with this song. keep in mind i already hated this original hopsin song. but in your case, the beat was already wannabe eminem then the lyrics came in with all that same old shit that we've heard but less clever and with worse quality audio. it just sounded like a 3rd generation rendition of something thats already been perfected by someone else. in your defence you did rap with the amount of animosity that the track demanded. i give it a 4

Originally Posted by ŢŔĘ=ĎŐРΣ

http://www.letsbeef.com/forums/prodd...d=50414-Im-119

I remixed it if you heard the previous track, sounds much better than it did before. it was horrible LOL anyways.. feel free to throw this some honest feedback.

@Gurp Da God

BEAT man i heard hopsin spit on this mad time ago and i never liked this beat. and i don't like hopsin... dudes always sayin how real he is but all i see is a giant gimmick. but anyway, i don't like the beat, its like psuedo-eminem but goofier. especially those changes and the quick violin run to transition.. its just an obvious shady production clone

PERFORMANCE you were goin in fersure. it suited the song well, crazy guy

PRODUCTION Your vocals are made to look shitty by hopsins voice on the hook. i could hear the shit you say though, so i can't complain too much, and the track wasn't popping even though you were pretty viscous. tbh its just your microphone, the quality was as good as its going to be at least to my knowledge

LYRIC didn't like it again. some images were worth a chuckle, like groupies doming u while u do a handstand... but that seems like a lot of effort on your part i dont know why youd wanna do that. it was eminem reminiscent in the style of 'look how crazy i am, these are hypothetical situations i've thought up' but yours were kinda just too weird to be humorous or entertaining for the most part. why would you piss on my face? floss with a giant's pubic hair? whores diaries n shit. you never wanna go FULL crazy person.. kinda like the full retard thing. you really do sound like some outback white dude that wants to eat babies. or actually no u don't sound intense enough to actually eat the babies, but u sound like you think about it. it was like a tasteless/less clever rendition of a style that eminem already completely shit all over. then the rest of the song was you calling an imaginary person a faggot... i didn't enjoy it

HOOK the hook was just hopsin's hook.. which i already thought was lame

OVERALL i can't fuck with this song. keep in mind i already hated this original hopsin song. but in your case, the beat was already wannabe eminem then the lyrics came in with all that same old shit that we've heard but less clever and with worse quality audio. it just sounded like a 3rd generation rendition of something thats already been perfected by someone else. in your defence you did rap with the amount of animosity that the track demanded. i give it a 4