Man that kind of attitude i can respect.. Ur not far from peaking bro, u got all the creative concepts.. all i gotta say sometimes u tend to force much of ur wordplays and multis.. sometimes it leaves a ??? like jus picture how it would sound if u spit it live.. im not sayin dumb it down,, but keep it on earth level, so peeps could relate to what u spittin, and ur punches would hit home then... besides that.. U got talent fam, ill as can be.. i understand why u do this , because me myself , i want to know what i could do to improve.. ciao!
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