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Elevation = Evolution....

Drop Some Advice for a LB Nigga

Check Out Some Of My Battles
VETS/Rooks/Ect Any Tips On Elevating?
Theres always Room for Improvement
Jus need Some Real Honesty to help my Kraft

(The Key to Evolution is Elevating)

Man that kind of attitude i can respect.. Ur not far from peaking bro, u got all the creative concepts.. all i gotta say sometimes u tend to force much of ur wordplays and multis.. sometimes it leaves a ??? like jus picture how it would sound if u spit it live.. im not sayin dumb it down,, but keep it on earth level, so peeps could relate to what u spittin, and ur punches would hit home then... besides that.. U got talent fam, ill as can be.. i understand why u do this , because me myself , i want to know what i could do to improve.. ciao!

thanks alot famo real talk.
anymore advice?

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I'll say, work on your wording, a lot of your concepts are pretty cool, wording them is key, up your multi syllable count, you kind of stay around the 2-3 syllables, challenge yourself, 4-6 syllables in your scheme, find a scheme that works for you, whether it's AAAA, ABBA, ABAB, and make sure your multiples are relevant to the punch you are delivering, notice a lot of filler in your verses, try not to force word plays, make sure the word play works both ways, that you have the word play tied in with it's true definition some where in the punch, you know what I mean? Off the top, can't really think of anything else, but if you'd like, you can PM me verses before you drop them; I'll drop some constructive criticism.

^ havin said that... is it ok to mix up the AAAA ABBA ABAB... in one verse?

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Originally Posted by Jason (Post 527222)

of course.. but make sure to flow in such a way that it reads properly.. sometimes people mix up schemes and it turns into a big clusterfuck and its hard to match the schemes up.

^ Word...

Basically what Jason said; sometimes causes a lot of confusion an will throw your entire flow out of the window.

I for the most part sometimes, find myself, doing,

AAABBA, Or an ABAB, or rarely sometimes execute it, AAAA.

Nothing wrong with mixing it up, thou, but sometimes if it's not mixed properly, when reading it out loud, it sounds ridiculous, like Jason said.

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Originally Posted by Jason (Post 527228)

yeaa exactly
yo .. prolly the most important thing though is making sure your endings match

if you go like .. A A B B A
then you do ... A B B A A
then you go A B A A B ... it will sound incomplete if you dont finish with the same scheme you started with.. its hard to explain without actual examples

You pretty much explained it to the tee Jason lol...

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Lol @ "Ok I did it....just take it easy on me I'm whack lol I been tryin to practice my multis tho" - Alright My Boooyyyy BLUE!! BTW: No EXPOS, If you don't get it, DON'T VOTE!! Thanks...

Here's your "Multi Lesson" My "GrassHoppa" -Bows- Lol

Honestly,

Sicc splits FRAMES AND NEVER ENDS, each PHRASE CAN SEVER HIM, then "Fuck his Bones Up" while I RAPE HIS SKELLETON!!

LMAO, Cut the Laughs, Let Me RAISE HIM HELL AGAIN!

This KIDS FAKING HE'S COLD WITH LAME SHIT, BE HOLD /- THIS FLAME'N IS BOLD, so "Fuck the Incubus Ghost" cause SICCS RAPING HIS SOUL!! // My SHITS SACRED AND MOST! - Get EATIN AN DEVOURED and now i'm BEATIN IN THIS COWARD /- He aint SEE'N SICC WITH POWER but you claim "Your Hip Hop!? Sweet", that just explains the REASON IT WENT SOUR!! (Lol @ His Profile Pic!) // w/Flows BEAST'EM,...[D]s LEFT SCROURED! - When the TECHS GO, DUDE, DROP BACK cause the REST KNOW, I'LL BOMB CATS /- with "Fist Like Loose Cannons" that EXPLODE ON CONTACT til their CHEST BONES ARE GONE FAG!! // Your TEXT FLOWS BEYOND TRASH - Blue, I'll SPLIT YOUR SHIT WITH A FEW SICKER FIST, THAT ABUSE /- And SPIT SOME SICC SYLLABLES that leave'em "Hung, [ShOrt]" like I used his LITTLE DICK FOR A NOOSE!! (Lmfao!!) // Your BITTER BITCH, YOU'LL GET BRUISED! - So Hope this KID BRUNG SOME WEAPONS or i'll RIP SON FOR STEPPIN /- SICCS KNOWN TO THREATIN and "Dictate Koreas/Careers" Like KIM JONG THE SECOND!! //(Hahaha...)

[That's a AAAA Multie Scheme, Style Switch to an ABAB Son!]

Honesly Blue, you "DEFINE LAME", so let me SMACK THIS KID WITH FACTS /- And "DESCRIBE HIM" (HmMmZ!) it's simple, you're the "ADJECTIVE OF WACK!!" (Word!) // This DUDE'S ASS! - And you're FAKE! STOP THE BEEF NOW, I bring BETTER HEAT WITH FLOWS /- Sicc's known to "TAKE COLONIES OUT", sucks, your only chance at "SETTLING A VOTE!!" (True!) // Your TEXT AN SHITS A JOKE! - HIM RIP SICC!? I'LL CRUSH THIS KID, So FUCK YOU FAG! TASTE MY TECH!! /- And ADMIT IT, YOU'RE "FUCKING PISSED" like when COUPLES HAVE "MAKE UP SEX!!" (Haha!) // So PLAY MY TEXT!? - (Lol) your FLOWS BASIC and you SPIT SOME WACK ASS RHYMES, /- Plus fuck your "Gun Talk", it "DON'T MAKE SENSE", I'll "GIVE YOUR ASININE/Ass A Nine!!" (Clever huh!?) // I'll TRASH THIS GUY - DJ!? just FACE IT; YOUR DEAD, Sicc'll TOPPLE THIS GEEK, OF COURSE /- Or just put a "BRACE ON YOUR LEG" cause you HONESTLY "KNEE/Need SUPPORT!!"...

::FINISHER!::

So BE A SPORT and quit, Their 'BOO'N YOU BLUE', I guess you WACK EMCEES NEED THE TRUTH /- Sad, no ones "ROOTING FOR YOU", even your FAMILY TREE REFUSED!!" (Damn, That's HARD Lol!)

[In the Will Farell Voice]: "My Boy Blue" = BODiED!? Lol...

Siccness
|E[the]R| 1o' - We're taking over.

Old battle verse of mine vs a Homie DJ Short Blueberry whom wanted a lesson on multis, just to give you and Idea...

Keep Improving, I see you little man. One day you'll be Almighty

What Does AAAA & AABBA
And All that Stand For a Bit Lost
Excuse me