I'll critique your music.

[Phil Banks]

Originally Posted by RULE

Lets Beef Track: Rule Of Gun (Ft SWAVY) - By: RULE

Last song i made, 8 years ago now (jesus).

Holla!

Ok from the start I don't like this beat anymore. Pianos all over. You know you got bars . It holds up as far as the song, but i'd like to hear you on something that isn't so up tempo. Those bars with inner rhymes are my favorites and those just sound better on a slower joint. You switched schemes quite a few times my favorite was the very last part of you verse. You need to record more stuff its a shame this all u got out

[Phil Banks]

Originally Posted by RULE

Lets Beef Track: Rule Of Gun (Ft SWAVY) - By: RULE

Last song i made, 8 years ago now (jesus).

Holla!

Ok from the start I don't like this beat anymore. Pianos all over. You know you got bars . It holds up as far as the song, but i'd like to hear you on something that isn't so up tempo. Those bars with inner rhymes are my favorites and those just sound better on a slower joint. You switched schemes quite a few times my favorite was the very last part of you verse. You need to record more stuff its a shame this all u got out