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Unread 10-15-2012, 07:31 PM
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Estimated Skill in Audio: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 8.33/10 stars
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108 Won / 16 Lost
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Default new joint would appreciate some feed back and fair rates..

new joint story telling first track ever done like this all feed back is welcome...thanks....and always returned with fair thought s....
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Unread 10-15-2012, 07:31 PM   #1
 
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108 Won / 16 Lost
Estimated Skill in Text: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.82/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.82/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.82/10 stars
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3 Won / 3 Lost
 
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Default new joint would appreciate some feed back and fair rates..

new joint story telling first track ever done like this all feed back is welcome...thanks....and always returned with fair thought s....
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Unread 10-16-2012, 08:24 PM
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"had to grind before the sun shine"

pretty good track. probably need to polish up the flow a little bit. the line about gettin caught on the barbed wire was good imagery, but i'm not sure if the rest of the track put pictures in my head like that. when i think of story tellers i think of nas, and his ability to paint images with his words.

keep grindin my man
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"had to grind before the sun shine"

pretty good track. probably need to polish up the flow a little bit. the line about gettin caught on the barbed wire was good imagery, but i'm not sure if the rest of the track put pictures in my head like that. when i think of story tellers i think of nas, and his ability to paint images with his words.

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Unread 10-17-2012, 03:25 AM
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Estimated Skill in Text: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.82/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.82/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.82/10 stars
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@20HotBeats yeah but unlike other dudes im me i dont try to be some bodie else-when i speak i speak what i live what i go threw.in my own style.im a mc but im also a poet...at times i sound one way at times i sound another....im getting over a kidney surgery so im up and down...it bothers me some times..other times it s like it never happened...thanks for the feed back...easyy...ohhh and the visions in your head i really dont expect you to see it...i live in ny this goes way past the story follow the start basicly this was a one day thing my grand father died...most was what i was feeling seeeing and going threw and trust me every thing said was real...
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Unread 10-17-2012, 03:25 AM   #3
 
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Estimated Skill in Audio: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 8.33/10 stars
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108 Won / 16 Lost
Estimated Skill in Text: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 8.33/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.82/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.82/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.82/10 stars
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@20HotBeats yeah but unlike other dudes im me i dont try to be some bodie else-when i speak i speak what i live what i go threw.in my own style.im a mc but im also a poet...at times i sound one way at times i sound another....im getting over a kidney surgery so im up and down...it bothers me some times..other times it s like it never happened...thanks for the feed back...easyy...ohhh and the visions in your head i really dont expect you to see it...i live in ny this goes way past the story follow the start basicly this was a one day thing my grand father died...most was what i was feeling seeeing and going threw and trust me every thing said was real...

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