new joint would appreciate some feed back and fair rates..
 

new joint story telling first track ever done like this all feed back is welcome...thanks....and always returned with fair thought s....

"had to grind before the sun shine"

pretty good track. probably need to polish up the flow a little bit. the line about gettin caught on the barbed wire was good imagery, but i'm not sure if the rest of the track put pictures in my head like that. when i think of story tellers i think of nas, and his ability to paint images with his words.

keep grindin my man

@20HotBeats yeah but unlike other dudes im me i dont try to be some bodie else-when i speak i speak what i live what i go threw.in my own style.im a mc but im also a poet...at times i sound one way at times i sound another....im getting over a kidney surgery so im up and down...it bothers me some times..other times it s like it never happened...thanks for the feed back...easyy...ohhh and the visions in your head i really dont expect you to see it...i live in ny this goes way past the story follow the start basicly this was a one day thing my grand father died...most was what i was feeling seeeing and going threw and trust me every thing said was real...