Welcome to the semi-finals of the GC. You both have until 11:59pm Est on the 8th to get your bars in. Best of luck to whoever goes through. 

both verses were decent i felt both couldve punched more but i think one went harder and was a bit more clever, the other was alright but wasnt heavy, this could go either way but i got my winner here so good luck to both rappers.

Expo

Substitutes watch from the sideline

“Andy” wrote on Woodys shoe in Toy Story (vets play with you)

Good students/no detention (lack detention/lacked attention)

He had the sig “2023 The year of Gold”

Midas: turns everything to gold

Odin/wand/wizard/spell of dominance

Father Stu was a Mark Wahlberg film where he’s a boxer who then turns into a priest, ends up becoming disabled & having end of life treatment to die (martyr/losing to god/bent up in a chair)

Good luck & battle M-R!

Expo: He's British & the following are all references: Bloke, Benders, Bollocks, Innit, Arse, Geezer, Bruv, Banter, Knob, Loo & Knackered. He's infamous for having a punchline saying the Cervix has a bone. Arse is how the English spell Ass. Ebenezer Scrooge is the main character from A Christmas Carol, who gets redemption after facing 3 spirits, this is the 3rd round in the tournament. He's dropped tons of dick jokes in his verses. Jack The Ripper, English legend, was a serial killer from Whitechapel, U.K. who they also called Leather Apron. The rest should be self explanatory.

Honestly... this is going to be the first time I've done this in awhile.... but one dropped a damn near a 10 verse on this one. Shit was a high ass 9 because it could have been closed out just a little stronger... but Im giving it a 10.

The other is actually improving. I see the attempts at inner multis and they are solid. I see you. Still got to work on a solid structure and text swagger if you will. People need to know text swagger is a whole point on the rating system. lol Punches were 

couldn’t “procure the parts” studying anatomy or alchemy, he’s no MERIT SCHOLAR doesn’t “dip his ink” in shit but he’ll say his “PEN IS” SHARPER innit funny “R” right there in the “arse” cus that’s he SPELLS IT “PROPER”!

that was low key some text swag right there. The way the punch was deliverd, word choice, structure..... Do more of that. 

The Ebenezer line was cool too just the main multis were a little too far apart reason why it didnt hit as hard. 

Fairs in. 

But u never spittin ill, vets “play with u” & ur still the PLAN B FOR ROOKIES DUDE ur “names been walked over” more times than “ANDY ON WOODY’S SHOE!”.. I mean look at u, LB seeing ur WEAK ASS GET RIPPED, last time HE PLANNED HIS FLIPS to SPEAK TRASH TO BRITS, but this dumbass is “more British than I am”, every vet here has “TEA BAGGED” THIS BITCH!! It’s been a decade & ur still not close to RAP PERFECTION, it “doesn’t mean Student's Good” if ur battles “LACKED ATTENTION” (lack detention).. so what kinda lies u tryna SELL THE AUDIENCE? Mods rig votes to help u win, we can TELL ITS OBVIOUS that “Odin waving that wand” is the only way you’ll see any “SPELL OF DOMINANCE”..

This is what won it. Really improved ya swag/delivery. Shit makes me happy to see homie. 

100ez

Wow. Great read here. This was close. Both had fire punches and setups and some nice wp from both. Mr had a couple more haymakers in his verse. Can't count out stu either. This could go either way but I got my winner.

Translations: Bloke=Man, Benders=Parties, Bollocks=Bullshit, Innit=Isn't It(Confirmation of something), Arse=Ass, Geezer=Old Man, Bruv=Dude, Banter=Talking Shit, Knob=Penis, Loo=Bathroom & Knackered=Exhausted/Broken

My choice was smoother and cleaner here. Both had good concepts. My choices execution was better imo as well. Now damn you Stu, I have a "in laymen's terms" punchline that I haven't put out yet but mine is a different concept fr. Overall dope shit from both. 

Very solid match-up here...and the expos u'all provided really helped further my understanding of what points were being conveyed in your bars..overall, you both dropped some pretty thoughtful ideas into ur verses. Big punches and interesting wp...gs!

MR:

I especially like the way you started off your verse, it was a solid opener..."setting the stage", with the name-play and relative punch, and making the historical connection...for a smooth transition into the next bar, good work there. The "Andy and Woody bar" was fire for sure! The next few (Brits) bars were pretty clever and clairvoyant in a way after reading STUs expo..that was a nice touch.

"It’s been a decade & ur still not close to RAP PERFECTION, it “doesn’t mean Student's Good” if ur battles “LACKED ATTENTION” (lack detention)"

This was a creative bar, at a glance..which was a nice concept, but I would had liked to see another term to substitute for "battle" that more so correlated with the detention themed here. A double entandre perhaps. Overall..nice!

"Odins wand, and the Year Of Gold" bars were solid jabs, dope.

“Wahlberg will leave u bent up in a chair” just to prove “I AM YOUR FATHER STU!”..nasty.

Overall, gs here man...very entertaining read..personals, punches, wp and a well structured verse.

STU:

Your opener was dope, the correlations you made between chimney/bricks/smoke..the entandres were nice for sure! Good transition into ur next concept, "bollocks" wp was a nice..didnt really understand how "cervix bone" made it into the sequence, until I had read your expo..and upon further investigation, I found it rather funny lol. Gs

he’s no MERIT SCHOLAR doesn’t “dip his ink” in shit but he’ll say his “PEN IS” SHARPER innit funny “R” right there in the “arse” cus that’s he SPELLS IT “PROPER”! Out of all the lines in your verse, I find issue with this one..I cant tell if its a typo thats preventing me from understanding it correctly or not..seems to have a good concept, but a bit fragmented perhaps?

He bright? nah he fooling that his text “serrated & serial” he’s ain’t a DEADLY SPEAKER I see right thru ‘em, look at his “dated material” HE’S A GEEZER typing obtuse “out of touch” Scrooge but this time he ain’t getting past “3 spirits” like EBENEZER! I thought this was pretty sick, well done! The the regerences, internal rhyming and punch was definitely on point. Very smooth!

The "hitting the loo" lines were pure comedy, a pretty good jab and well placed timing.

I like the correlations made in your closer, thought you ended your well with a very solid punch!

Overall, this was a pleasing read..I thought a lot of the concepts were great and super creative, one edges it for me here..it could definitely go either way.

GB, GL

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Appreciate the breakdowns y'all

good battle yall. both had their ups and downs - appreciated one's creativity but the uk thing ran too long for my liking, became uneffective real quick. The other punched more frequently which is always good in a bout but they were underveloped, lacked buildup. GL to whoever gets to the finals

I think this was a pretty even match but the winner won by having more consistency in two categories.... multis and set ups.. MAY THE BEST BARS PREVAIL!

some highlights: e bright? nah he fooling that his text “serrated & serial” he’s ain’t a DEADLY SPEAKER I see right thru ‘em, look at his “dated material” HE’S A GEEZER typing obtuse “out of touch” Scrooge but this time he ain’t getting past “3 spirits” like EBENEZER!& But u never spittin ill, vets “play with u” & ur still the PLAN B FOR ROOKIES DUDE ur “names been walked over” more times than “ANDY ON WOODY’S SHOE!”